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Some people use the internet to search for solution to their medical problems. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and example from your experience.

Now days internet searching is very common in each generation people because cheap data packs and all public are finding their different solution through internet search. Nevertheless, some people also searching for their medical need sometime it is helpful but also sometime it cause serious problem. I personally think that medical treatment by internet search is sometime harmful for us. I disagree with the statement.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
An apostrophe may be missing.days'day's
days
 internet searching is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 common in each generation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 data packs and all public are finding their This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 solution through internet search. Nevertheless
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
also
 searching for their medical need sometime it is helpful This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 sometime it After ‘it’, use the third-person verb form “causes”.causes
cause
 serious problem. I personally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that medical treatment by internet search is sometime harmful for us. I disagree with the statement. 