In recent years, the world has seen many kinds of music and the broad category of music are mainly international and traditional music. Music has diversified functions for every region in the world. Why we do need music? Because music can inspire us, represents our emotion and can remedy our wounds. In my opinion, the traditional music has more significance than the International music which people listen to everywhere in this era. Traditional music has far greater functions and obvious roles than the international music. I will explain some reasons for my belief in the following paragraphs.
First, the traditional music has become the important part in many cultural ceremonies, such as wedding and death ceremony. For example, in a wedding ceremony, we need traditional music when a couple each other. Without music, this ceremony will not be complete. Secondly, nowadays we still use traditional music as a medium for communication and praising God or other people. For instance, sometimes we use music to praise our creator. Thirdly, every country or region has a distinguished genre for identity. Music also has the aim to differentiate a country or a region from others. For example, Indonesia has dangdut and keroncong music and these music have become Indonesian cultural identity.
In addition, we need traditional music to accompany traditional dancing. In Indonesia, we have a lot of traditional dancing and each dancing has music to escort to manage every motion. For example, traditional music which accompanies jejer dance is different from candra dewi dance, because the music has to be suitable with every motion in each dance.
Although nowadays people often listen to international music, but it does not mean that this music has more important functions than the traditional music, while international music is mostly used by people for entertain purposes traditional music represents our identity and culture.
In recent years, the world has
seen
many
kinds of
music
and the broad category of
music
are
mainly
international
and
traditional
music
.
Music
has diversified functions for every region in the world. Why we do need
music
?
Because
music
can inspire us, represents our emotion and can remedy our wounds. In my opinion, the
traditional
music
has more significance than the
International
music
which
people
listen to everywhere in this era.
Traditional
music
has far greater functions and obvious roles than the
international
music
. I will
explain
some
reasons for my belief in the following paragraphs.
First
, the
traditional
music
has become the
important
part in
many
cultural
ceremonies
, such as wedding and death
ceremony
.
For example
, in a wedding
ceremony
, we need
traditional
music
when a couple each other. Without
music
, this
ceremony
will not be complete.
Secondly
, nowadays we
still
use
traditional
music
as a medium for communication and praising God or other
people
.
For instance
,
sometimes
we
use
music
to praise our creator.
Thirdly
, every country or region has a distinguished genre for identity.
Music
also
has the aim to differentiate a country or a region from others.
For example
, Indonesia has
dangdut
and
keroncong
music
and these
music
have become Indonesian cultural identity.
In addition
, we need
traditional
music
to accompany
traditional
dancing. In Indonesia, we have
a lot of
traditional
dancing and each dancing has
music
to escort to manage every motion.
For example
,
traditional
music
which accompanies
jejer
dance is
different
from
candra
dewi
dance,
because
the
music
has to
be suitable with every motion in each dance.
Although nowadays
people
often
listen to
international
music
,
but
it does not mean that this
music
has more
important
functions than the
traditional
music
, while
international
music
is
mostly
used
by
people
for entertain purposes
traditional
music
represents our identity and culture.
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