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THERE ARE INCREASE BIN THE TEMPERATURE DUE TO HUMAN ACTIONS. DISCUSS THE VARIOUS HUMAN ACTIVITIES THAT IS RESPONSIBLE FOR THE INCREASE IN TEMPERATURE. v.1

THERE ARE INCREASE BIN THE TEMPERATURE DUE TO HUMAN ACTIONS. DISCUSS THE VARIOUS HUMAN ACTIVITIES THAT IS RESPONSIBLE FOR THE INCREASE IN TEMPERATURE. v. 1
The global warming is the highly debated issue at present as there are lots of CANGES HAS BEEN OCCURING THAN BEFORE. THIS MAY BE THE EFFECFT OF HUMAN ACTIVITIES WHICH IS CONTRIBUTING TO CHANGE TEMPERATURE. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE MAJOR HUMAN ACTIONS THAT ARE RESPONSIBLE FOR THE CHANGE WITH THE RELAVANT EXAMPLE. ON HE SIDE OF HUMAN ACTIVITIES, CUTTIMG TREE IS THE PRIME ACTIVITY IS BEING PERFORMED BU THE PEOPLE CONSEQUENTLY FOR NUMEROUS ESSENTIAL NEEDS. AS TREES ARE THE MAIN SOURCE OF KEEPING THE AUTMOSPHERE BALANCED WHY RELEASING THE OXYZEN AND INHALING THE DANGEROUS GASES LIKE CARBON DIOXIDE. NEVERTHELESS, TREE PALCES COULD USE TO BUILD THE DWELLS FOR THE PEOPLE. FOR EXAMPLE, THE INDIA'S WEATHER FORCAST REPORSTED REVELEALED THAT THERE HAS BEEN SURGE IN THE MONSOON WEATHER THAN EVER BEFORE BECAUSE OF THE LESS NUMBER OF TREES PRESENT IN THE NATION. ADDITIONALLY, INCRESE IN NUMBER OF VEHICLES IN THE WORLD MAY BE THE SECOND MAJOR CAUSE OF UNBALANCE TEMERATURE AROUND THE WORLD. DUE THE HARMFULL GASES EXHAUSTED FROM THE VEHICLE THAT IS DETRIMENTAL FOR THE ENVIRONMENT. THIS GASES INCREASE THE HOTNESS IN THE ATMOSPHERE WHICH LEADS TO AFFCET THE TEMERATURE. FOR INSTANCE, THE ENVIRONMENTAL DEPARTMENT OF THE UK DID A SURVEY AND REPORTED THAT WHEN THERE IS A LESS CARS OR HEVAY VEHICLE RUN ON THE ROAD, THE WIND IS MORE COLDER THAN USUSAL. IN CONCLUSION, PROPER TEMPERATURE INDEED REQUIRE FOR BETTER AND HELATHY LIVELIHOOD. TO MAKE THE HUMAN ACTIONS DECLINE, GOVERNMENT HAS TO TAKE SOME ACTION WITH THE SUPPORT OF THE CIVILIAN. HOWEVER, ONE ONLY CAN NOT SOLVE THE PROBLEM. NEED TO MAKE CITIZENS AWARE OF FUTURE CONSEQUENCES OF NOT RESTRICTING THE BAD HABITS JUST TO SATISFIY THEIR OWN NEED.
The global warming is the
highly
debated issue at present as there are lots of
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CANGES
HAS BEEN
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OCCURING
THAN
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BEFORE
. THIS MAY BE THE
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EFFECFT
OF
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HUMAN
ACTIVITIES WHICH IS CONTRIBUTING TO
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CHANGE
TEMPERATURE. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE MAJOR
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HUMAN
ACTIONS THAT ARE RESPONSIBLE FOR THE
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CHANGE
WITH THE
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RELAVANT
EXAMPLE.

ON
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HE
SIDE OF
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HUMAN
ACTIVITIES,
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CUTTIMG
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TREE
IS THE PRIME ACTIVITY IS
BEING PERFORMED
BU THE
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PEOPLE
CONSEQUENTLY
FOR NUMEROUS ESSENTIAL NEEDS. AS
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TREES
ARE THE MAIN SOURCE OF KEEPING THE
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AUTMOSPHERE
BALANCED WHY RELEASING THE
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OXYZEN
AND INHALING THE
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DANGEROUS
GASES LIKE CARBON DIOXIDE.
NEVERTHELESS
,
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TREE
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PALCES
COULD
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USE
TO BUILD THE DWELLS FOR THE
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PEOPLE
.
FOR EXAMPLE
, THE INDIA'S WEATHER
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FORCAST
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REPORSTED
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REVELEALED
THAT THERE HAS BEEN SURGE IN THE MONSOON
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WEATHER
THAN EVER
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BEFORE
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BECAUSE
OF THE LESS NUMBER OF
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TREES
PRESENT IN THE NATION.

ADDITIONALLY
,
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INCRESE
IN NUMBER OF VEHICLES IN THE WORLD MAY BE THE SECOND MAJOR CAUSE OF UNBALANCE
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TEMERATURE
AROUND THE WORLD.
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DUE THE
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HARMFULL
GASES EXHAUSTED FROM THE VEHICLE
THAT IS
DETRIMENTAL FOR THE ENVIRONMENT. THIS GASES INCREASE THE HOTNESS IN THE ATMOSPHERE WHICH LEADS TO
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AFFCET
THE
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TEMERATURE
.
FOR INSTANCE
, THE ENVIRONMENTAL DEPARTMENT OF THE UK DID A SURVEY AND REPORTED THAT WHEN THERE IS A
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LESS
CARS OR
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HEVAY
VEHICLE RUN ON THE ROAD, THE WIND IS
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MORE COLDER
THAN
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USUSAL
.

IN CONCLUSION
, PROPER TEMPERATURE
INDEED
REQUIRE FOR BETTER AND
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HELATHY
LIVELIHOOD. TO
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MAKE
THE
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HUMAN
ACTIONS DECLINE,
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GOVERNMENT
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HAS TO
TAKE
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SOME
ACTION WITH THE SUPPORT OF THE CIVILIAN.
HOWEVER
, ONE
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ONLY
CAN NOT SOLVE THE PROBLEM. NEED TO
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MAKE
CITIZENS AWARE OF FUTURE CONSEQUENCES OF NOT RESTRICTING THE
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BAD
HABITS
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JUST
TO
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SATISFIY
THEIR
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OWN
NEED.
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IELTS essay THERE ARE INCREASE BIN THE TEMPERATURE DUE TO HUMAN ACTIONS. DISCUSS THE VARIOUS HUMAN ACTIVITIES THAT IS RESPONSIBLE FOR THE INCREASE IN TEMPERATURE. v. 1

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