In this fast moving world everyone is busy doing their work and are very stressed and exhausted. Thus, the humans now has to find ways be stressfree and music has always been a first priority. In ancient ages also the music has served its role as a pain reliever rather than just entertainment. Music acts as a best medicine. Music makes listeners energetic.
But, there is always a dilemma whether one should listen a traditional music or an International music? For an answer to this there has been many serveys and the result of it shows that the international music was more popular amoung the young listeners while the elder ones had penchant for the traditional music. From my point of view both music has its own importance and hence they cannot be separated.
Traditional music of any country reflects the culture of country in its music and makes the listener proud bringing the glorious memory of the past. We provide a n insight of the country' s culture. Nowaday the international music is gaining a lot of popularity over the traditional music, the fact is that the people loves to listen new and different things and international music serves this purpose.
No music either the traditional or International is important there is no scale to compare these music because the type of music people depends on the Moods and liking of the listener and everyone is not same and so they have different taste and liking. But from my point of you it is very difficult to predict with music is important because both have a significant role to play in the life of the listeners. But I am more attracted towards the traditional music as it is more related to the culture in which we are brought up.
In this
fast
moving world everyone is busy doing their work and are
very
stressed
and exhausted.
Thus
, the humans
now
has to
find ways be
stressfree
and
music
has always been a
first
priority. In ancient ages
also
the
music
has served its role as a pain reliever
rather
than
just
entertainment.
Music
acts as
a
best medicine.
Music
makes
listeners energetic.
But
, there is always a dilemma whether one should listen a
traditional
music
or an
International
music
? For an answer to this there has been
many
serveys
and the result of it
shows
that the
international
music
was more popular
amoung
the young listeners while the elder ones had penchant for the
traditional
music
. From my point of view both
music
has its
own
importance and
hence
they cannot
be separated
.
Traditional
music
of any country reflects the culture of country in its
music
and
makes
the
listener
proud bringing the glorious memory of the past. We provide
a
n insight of the
country&
#039; s culture.
Nowaday
the
international
music
is gaining
a lot of
popularity over the
traditional
music
, the fact is that the
people
loves
to listen new and
different
things and
international
music
serves this purpose.
No
music
either the
traditional
or
International
is
important
there is no scale to compare these
music
because
the type of
music
people
depends
on the Moods and liking of the
listener
and everyone is not
same and
so
they have
different
taste and liking.
But
from my point of you it is
very
difficult to predict with
music
is
important
because
both have a significant role to play in the life of the listeners.
But
I am more attracted towards the
traditional
music
as it is more related to the culture in which we
are brought
up.
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