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The two designs are showen illistrate the current fearture and a number of developments to renew it to compensate the need.

The two designs are showen illistrate the current fearture and a number of developments to renew it to compensate the need. 5RyV
The two designs are showen illistrate the current fearture and a number of developments to renew it to compensate the need. There will be more full use of the area for other activities that are not exist at present time, such as: dancing studio in the east of the pool, cafe and sport shops beneth it and sports hall between it and dancing studio. In addition, the existing gym will be widen, another leisure pool in the western side will be added to the current pool which is placed at the center. More sports to be practiced means more rooms to change the spot cloths must be designed. These new well planned design will encourage more number of students to practice sport to keep their body fit and healthy, as, it is an important issue for university to care about.
The two designs are
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showen
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illistrate
the
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current
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fearture
and a number of developments to renew it to compensate the need.

There will be more full
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use
of the area for other activities that are not
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exist
at present time, such as: dancing studio in the east of the pool,
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cafe
and
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sport
shops
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beneth
it and
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sports
hall between it and dancing studio.
In addition
, the existing gym will be
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widen
, another leisure pool in the western side will be
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added
to the
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current
pool which
is placed
at the center.

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sports
to
be practiced
means more rooms to
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change
the spot cloths
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must
be designed
.

These new well planned design will encourage more number of students to practice
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sport
to
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keep
their body fit and healthy, as, it is an
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important
issue for university to care about.

IELTS essay The two designs are showen illistrate the current fearture and a number of developments to renew it to compensate the need.

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140 words
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