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Write at least 150 words. The system used for rubbish collection in our area is not working properly. Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly and how this effect you and your neighbours, suggest what would be done about the problem.

The purpose of this letter is to inform the council regarding rubbish collection issue in our area. Firstly, I want council to take serious action against the subcontractor which are collecting rubbish. Our surbab has effected a lot because of lack of rubbish collection trucks. The logistics are not good enough. From last two months our neighbourhood is suffering from it. Previously trucks were coming for collection once a week but now they are coming once for nightly. My family and many more other families are getting sick because of dirt and rubbish additionally, mosquitos and flies increased. To resolve this issue council need to increase logistic supply and collection need to be back to normal which was once a week.
The purpose of this letter is to inform the council regarding
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rubbish
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collection
issue in our area.
Firstly
, I want council to take serious action against the subcontractor which are collecting
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rubbish
. Our
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surbab
has effected a lot
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because
of lack of
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rubbish
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collection
trucks. The logistics are not
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good
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enough
. From last two months our
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neighbourhood
is suffering from it. Previously trucks were coming for
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collection
once a week
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but
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now
they are coming once for nightly. My family and
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many
more other families are getting sick
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because
of dirt and
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rubbish
additionally
, mosquitos and flies increased. To resolve this issue council need to increase logistic supply and
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collection
need to be back to normal which was once a week.
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IELTS essay The system used for rubbish collection in our area is not working properly. Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly and how this effect you and your neighbours, suggest what would be done about the problem.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
121 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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