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Cutting down forests is a real environmental threat; yet, this is still happening at a great rate around the world. Why do you think forests are being destroyed? Are there any benefits from the destruction of forests?

Deforestation is a major problem that put on danger our environment. This is not only national issue, but an international one. As far as I am concerned, ther is no pros of this massacre. We must protect our environment by forbidden such behaviours so we can keep ourselfs from harm. First of all, forest is the safe home for a range of animals. Then, cutting down the trees leave this creatures without a place to live. As a result, they will be a multiples deaths. In other words, the animals will be extincted. Nowdays, in Australy for example, the deforestation and fire issues result an extinction of the Lama. undoubtedly, this is a realy big warning alarm. On the other hand, seeing the forest desapear, disrupts the ecological balance, due to the fact that the big cause of the Global Warming is cutting down forests. according to recent research, the increase of forest fires and flooding is resulting from this phenomen. To conclue, the safety of our world is bound to the conserve of our environment. To sum up with, we are not living alone in this gloge, we share it with other creatures such as animals and plants. Thus we have to keep this balance if we want to live safely and healthy. Protecting our forests save animals lives and decrease the intensity of the Global Warming.
Deforestation is a major problem that put on
danger
our environment. This is not
only
national issue,
but
an international one. As far as I
am concerned
,
ther
is no pros of this massacre. We
must
protect our environment by forbidden such behaviours
so
we can
keep
ourselfs
from harm.
First of all
,
forest
is the safe home for a range of
animals
. Then, cutting down the trees
leave
this
creatures without a place to
live
.
As a result
, they will be a multiples deaths.
In other words
, the
animals
will
be extincted
.
Nowdays
, in
Australy
for example
, the deforestation and fire issues result an extinction of the Lama.
undoubtedly
, this is a
realy
big
warning alarm.
On the other hand
, seeing the
forest
desapear
, disrupts the ecological balance, due to the fact that the
big
cause of the Global Warming is cutting down
forests
.
according
to recent research, the increase of
forest
fires and flooding is resulting from this
phenomen
. To
conclue
, the safety of our world
is bound
to the conserve of our environment. To sum up with, we are not living alone in this
gloge
, we share it with other creatures such as
animals
and plants.
Thus
we
have to
keep
this balance if we want to
live
safely
and healthy. Protecting our
forests
save
animals
lives
and decrease the intensity of the Global Warming.
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IELTS essay Cutting down forests is a real environmental threat; yet, this is still happening at a great rate around the world. Why do you think forests are being destroyed? Are there any benefits from the destruction of forests?

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