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The spread of an ‘global language’ such as English will threaten national languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The spread of an ‘global language’ such as English will threaten national languages. with this opinion? Llx78
English is gaining its popularity in the modern world. Some people believe this trend might cause the possible extinction of the national language of each country, while others view it as acceptable, and even that this may result in the positive development of that country in many fields. I partly agree with the latter view for the following reasons. Opponents even go so far to claim that the loss of a language is just the tip of the iceberg. Not only does that nation forget its own language, but its culture and economic situations are at stake as well. Is it true in any circumstance? Facts have shown that countries, like Singapore, by adopting an international language, have generated a huge amount of profit through the tourism industry. More visitors worldwide swarm to this nation, as a result of finding less difficulty in their communication with local people and being attracted to these people’s high adaptability and hospitality. Admittedly, only by studying the King’s language, English, as people label, do people in the third world enjoy significant economic growth when having a chance to extend the market and learning good cultural aspects of giant and developed countries, like America and Britain. At the same time, through this global language, each country can promote its culture easily through the internet and other means of media. Some of us may find ourselves falling in love with cultures of other nations, accidentally through our discovery of their people, way of thinking, and living after surfing information in such a common language. It is undeniable that according to monthly social surveys, about three to four languages across the world are dying out, due to the increasingly small size of native speakers. In case that authorities are ready to pour a huge amount of money into linguistic programs, say, training, and insisting on indigenous textbooks, the language of that country is sure to survive well. All things considered, provided that the language of each nation receives more attention from the government, and positive aspects of an international language as absorbed, the native language is alive, along with the contribution of the global ones, so as to enrich that country itself, economically and culturally.
English is gaining its popularity in the modern world.
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believe this trend might cause the possible extinction of the national
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language
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country
, while others view it as acceptable, and even that this may result in the
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positive
development of that
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country
in
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fields. I partly
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with the latter view for the following reasons.

Opponents even go
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far to claim that the loss of a
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language
is
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the tip of the iceberg. Not
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does that
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nation
forget its
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own
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language
,
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but
its culture and economic situations are at stake
as well
. Is it true in any circumstance? Facts have shown that
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countries
, like Singapore, by adopting an international
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language
, have generated a huge amount of profit
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through
the tourism industry. More visitors worldwide swarm to this
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nation
,
as a result
of finding less difficulty in their communication with local
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people
and
being attracted
to these
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people’s
high adaptability and hospitality.

Admittedly
,
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only
by studying the King’s
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language
, English, as
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people
label, do
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people
in the third world enjoy significant economic growth when having a chance to extend the market and learning
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good
cultural aspects of giant and developed
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countries
, like America and Britain. At the same time,
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through
this global
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language
, each
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country
can promote its culture
easily
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through
the internet and other means of media.
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Some
of us may find ourselves falling in
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love
with cultures of other
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nations
,
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through
our discovery of their
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people
, way of thinking, and living after surfing information in such a common language.

It is undeniable that according to monthly social surveys, about three to four
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languages
across the world are dying out, due to the
increasingly
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small
size of native speakers. In case that authorities are ready to pour a huge amount of money into linguistic programs, say, training, and insisting on indigenous textbooks, the
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language
of that
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country
is sure to survive well.

All things considered, provided that the
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language
of each
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nation
receives more attention from the
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government
, and
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positive
aspects of an international
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language
as absorbed, the native
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language
is alive, along with the contribution of the global ones,
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enrich that
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country
itself,
economically
and
culturally
.
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IELTS essay The spread of an ‘global language’ such as English will threaten national languages. with this opinion?

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