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The reading and lecture both are discussed about silver coin that is found and norse settlements.

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The reading and lecture both are discussed about silver coin that is found and norse settlements. While the reading states that the coin are not a genuine or a fake evidence to mislead the public and provides three reasons to support. However, the professor say that archaeologist don't think that coin is not a fake evidence and The lecture refutes each of the reading points. Fist of all, the reading claims that the coin are found in native american site in maine but Norse settlement are in canada, more than thousand kilometers distance between this to site. so this to site are not connected to each other. However, the lecture refutes this point by sat that Norse are like to travel fare away place. Norse are travel to north america site and bring coin with them. In additions, the reading argues this point by no other coin are not found in canadian sites. The reading posit that Norse did not bring any silver coins with them. The lecture counter this point by say that force of north american settlemnts are bring coin with them but when they understand silver coin are useful at europe. So they take all silver coin with them. Lastly, the reading passage argues that silver coin are not recognize as money in native north american settlement and they understood silver coin are useless to them. The professor refutes this point by saying that norse people are used silver coin as ornament that why norse tread silver coin with them.
The
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both
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about
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silver
coin that
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norse
settlements. While the
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states that the coin are not a genuine or a fake evidence to mislead the public and provides three reasons to support.
However
, the professor say
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that archaeologist don
't
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think
that coin is not a fake evidence and The
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lecture
refutes each of the
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points.

Fist of all, the
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claims that the coin
are found
in native
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american
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site
in
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maine
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but
Norse settlement are in
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canada
, more than
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thousand
kilometers distance between this to
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site
.
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so
this to
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site
are not connected to each other.
However
, the
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lecture
refutes this
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point
by sat that Norse are like to travel fare away place. Norse are travel to
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north america
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site
and bring coin with them.

In additions, the
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reading
argues this
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point
by no other coin are not found in
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canadian
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sites
. The
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that Norse did not bring any
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silver
coins with them. The
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counter this
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point
by say that force of
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north american
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settlemnts
are
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bring
coin with them
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but
when they understand
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silver
coin are useful at
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europe
.
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they take all
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silver
coin with them.

Lastly
, the
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reading
passage argues that
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silver
coin are not
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recognize
as money in native
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north american
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settlement and
they understood
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silver
coin are useless to them. The professor refutes this
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point
by saying that
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norse
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people
are
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used
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silver
coin as ornament that why
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norse
tread
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silver
coin with them.
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IELTS essay The reading and lecture both are discussed about silver coin that is found and norse settlements.

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