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The picture displays the development of the mobile phone in two phases. Overall it can be seen that the early mobile phone has transformed into a mobile phone that is equipped with more features but the size has become smaller and lighter looking at the picture in more detail both phases of the contact have earphone and a keyboard. The early mobile dial was 150g in weight with length and width of 130 mm and 150 mm respectively. The display of the call up is only black/white with a function button located in the center of the old mobile phone. In sharp contrast with an early mobile phone, contemporary mobile phone is more compact weighing only 70g its length and width are also shorter than old mobile phone only 90 mm and 40 mm respectively. The screens on the contemporary mobile phone are full-color and it is foldable. furthermore, the contemporary mobile phone has many functions like e-mail, internet, music player, and multiplayer game and it is added a camera with video capability it.

The picture displays the development of the mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 in two phases. Overall
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seen
 that the early mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 has transformed into a mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 that is equipped
 with more features This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the size has become smaller and lighter looking at the picture in more detail both phases of the contact have earphone and a keyboard. The early mobile dial was 150g in weight with length and width of 130 mm and 150 mm respectively
. The display of the call up is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 black/white with a function button located in the center of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 mobile

phone.

In sharp contrast with an early mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
, contemporary mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 is more compact weighing

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 70g its length and width are also
 shorter than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 90 mm and 40 mm

respectively
. The screens on the contemporary mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 are full-color and it is foldable. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFurthermore
furthermore
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the contemporary mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
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many
 functions like e-mail, internet, music player, and multiplayer

game and it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 a camera with video capability it. 