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The picture below shows the manufacturing process of sugar from sugar canes.

The picture below shows the manufacturing process of sugar from sugar canes. 2xBGX

The depiction illustrates the process how sugar is made from sugar cane. It comprises seven steps overall from growing sugar canes for a year or up to two years to drying and cooling process. To begin with, the canes used for sugar making are sown and grown for a nearly 12-18 months. Followed by harvesting by means of a combine or by hand, and then sugar canes are crushed with a specialized machine which extracts juice from stem. Next step is cleaning any impurities from juice by pouring it through limestone filter. In the following stage, purified liquid is converted into syrup after being heated. Centrifuge process takes place to separate sugar crystals from syrup and the last thing to do is that sugar is dried and cooled to be packed for use.

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