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The people we work with have many different characteristics and all of them affect the quality of our time at work Of the following what do you think is the most important quality for a boss or supervisor to have a serious attitude about their work a lot

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Work is a critical part of our life. Almost most of us have some colleagues in workplace whom we have close contact daily. It is inevitable that character of coworkers effect each other's bahaviors. While some people may like work with people who are well-experienced, honest, or serious person, I feel that having an experienced colleague who has a serious attitude about work is a valuable chance. In the following essay, I will elaborate on my reasons. First, well-experienced peers who are helpful in office are real gems. Everyday in work, there is something new because of the high pace of condition change, hence, colleagues who have a bunch of expereience not only could help others to deal with these new circumstance but also could mentally assist their fellows to be calm and collected. To put this in perspective, in pharmacy where I work, everyday we see a new prescription with different condition which the doctors put a new medication on it. For some of junior pharmacists it is not a convenient situation, handling the new prescription because of the unusual situation after this COVID-19 pandemic, through which we have some shortage and national back order. I see how easy some of my senior colleagus deal with these prescription. It is not relevant to knowledge, in contrast, it comes from experience that they are able to communicate in a way to convince doctors to change their mind. Were experienced pharmacist not in our pharmacy, we would have a lot of chalenges everyday. Second, a serious attitiude toward work make a productive environment which ends up having the best yield in work. Discipline is one of the thumb role of many of successful manager and staffs. Doing the right task at the right moment is a basic role of achieving goals in all projects, which needs a serious attitude and a restrict plan. For example, I used to work in a pharmaceutical company in which we made some new protein-based medications. This process included many steps through which we should follow the instruction preciesly in order to make a reasonable yield. A comprehensive attention needed to do all meseaurments. It was not possible without a serious attitude about work in all employees who work in that company. Thanks to the manager attitude who was able to cultivate such a disciplined environemnt in company which led to make the best products in the world. All in all, I strongly believe that a well-experienced colleague is a gem because they could solve any problem in worlpalce in an easy way. In addition, having a serious attitude is nessecary to accompolish jobs that are very sensitive.
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are well-experienced, honest, or
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person, I feel that having an experienced
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colleague
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who
has a
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serious
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work
is a valuable chance. In the following essay, I will elaborate on my reasons.

First
, well-experienced peers
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who
are helpful in office are real gems.
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in
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work
, there is something
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new
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of the high pace of condition
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expereience
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others to deal with these
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also
could mentally assist their fellows to be calm and collected. To put this in perspective, in pharmacy where I
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work
, everyday we
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a
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prescription with
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different
condition which the doctors put a
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new
medication on it. For
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some
of junior pharmacists it is not a convenient situation, handling the
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new
prescription
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because
of the unusual situation after this COVID-19 pandemic, through which we have
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some
shortage and national back order. I
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see
how easy
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some
of my senior
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colleagus
deal with these prescription. It is not relevant to knowledge,
in contrast
, it
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comes
from experience that they are able to communicate in a way to convince doctors to
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change
their mind.
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pharmacist not in our pharmacy, we would have
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a lot of
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chalenges
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everyday
.

Second, a
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attitiude
toward
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work
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make
a productive environment which ends up having the best yield in
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work
. Discipline is one of the thumb role of
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many
of successful manager and staffs. Doing the right task at the right moment is a basic role of achieving goals in all projects, which needs a
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serious
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attitude
and a restrict plan.
For example
, I
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used
to
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work
in a pharmaceutical
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company
in which we made
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some
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new
protein-based medications. This process included
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many
steps through which we should follow the instruction
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preciesly
in order to
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make
a reasonable yield. A comprehensive attention needed to do all
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meseaurments
. It was not possible without a
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serious
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attitude
about
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work
in all employees
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work
in that
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company
. Thanks to the manager
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attitude
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who
was able to cultivate such a disciplined
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environemnt
in
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company
which led to
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make
the best products in the world.

All in all, I
strongly
believe that a well-experienced
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colleague
is a gem
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because
they could solve any problem in
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worlpalce
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, having a
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accompolish
jobs that are
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IELTS essay The people we work with have many different characteristics and all of them affect the quality of our time at work Of the following what do you think is the most important quality for a boss or supervisor to have a serious attitude about their work a lot

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4 paragraphs
442 words
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