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The pandemic of Coronavirus.

Apparently, all people throughout the world are concerned about the pandemic of Coronavirus. Since the spread of the virus, people have decided to stay in their home, and have refused to hang out with their friends. For instance, they have provisionally ended their relationship with their relatives. In addition, The virus is truly a fatal disease which poses a big threat to humanity. Besides, it has various symptoms that are vague and cannot be recognized easily. Due to the accurate research about this virus, the most prevalent and common symptoms are coughing and asthma and unfortunately, the vast majority of people who have these hazardous symptoms, will lose their lives. In other words, a person who comes down with these symptoms, should err on the side of caution If they want to survive. It might be a bit confusing and difficult to distinguish between correct and fraudulent admonitions. Some experts advise us to improve our immune system in order to prepare it to protect our body against the virus, on the contrary, the others claim that if the person's body who is infected with this virus is powerful, it will eventually result in death. The fact is that it will be execrable to have an immune system which is vulnerable to illnesses. Scientists haven't been able to iron out the problem yet, despite their adequate knowledge, but at least they could warn people about the severity of the illness. In conclusion, the best way to defend ourselves against this acute virus is to stay home and wear a facial mask as long as we are threatened by this virus
Apparently
, all
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people
throughout the world
are concerned
about the pandemic of Coronavirus. Since the spread of the
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virus
,
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people
have decided to stay in their home, and have refused to hang out with their friends.
For instance
, they have
provisionally
ended their relationship with their relatives.
In addition
, The
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virus
is
truly
a fatal disease which poses a
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big
threat to humanity.
Besides
, it has various
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symptoms
that are vague and cannot
be recognized
easily
.

Due to the accurate research about this
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virus
, the most prevalent and common
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symptoms
are coughing and asthma and unfortunately, the vast majority of
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people
who have these hazardous
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symptoms
, will lose their
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lives
.
In other words
, a person who
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comes
down with these
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symptoms
, should err on the side of caution If they want to survive.

It might be a bit confusing and difficult to distinguish between correct and fraudulent admonitions.
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Some
experts advise us to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
our immune system in order to prepare it to protect our body against the
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virus
,
on the contrary
, the others claim that if the person's body who
is infected
with this
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virus
is powerful, it will
eventually
result in death. The fact is that it will be execrable to have an immune system which is vulnerable to illnesses.

Scientists haven't been able to iron out the problem
yet
, despite their adequate knowledge,
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but
at least they could warn
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people
about the severity of the illness.

In conclusion
, the best way to defend ourselves against this acute
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virus
is to stay home and wear a facial mask as long as we
are threatened
by this
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virus
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IELTS essay The pandemic of Coronavirus.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
268 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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