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The most fantastic moment in your life

The most fantastic moment in your life AJRJX
My graduation day springs to mind when it comes to a memorable life event. It was September of last year, and most students were gearing up for the new semester. My high school hosted the ceremony, and we all arrived at 8 a. m. When participating, I wore a flowing white Ao Dai. First, my friends and I started by looking for seats in our class. For the ceremony, we waited in line. I'm ecstatic when the drums and tunes start playing. The stage is beautifully decorated. After that, I was called to receive flowers and take pictures with teachers. My heart feels as though it's about to leap from my chest. The ceremony went very well, and I was very proud of the graduation moment that year.
My graduation day springs to mind when it
comes
to a memorable life
event
. It was September of last year, and most students were gearing up for the new semester. My high school hosted the ceremony, and we all arrived at 8 a. m. When participating, I wore a flowing white
Ao
Dai
.
First
, my friends and I
started
by looking for seats in our
class
. For the ceremony, we waited in line. I'm ecstatic when the drums and tunes
start
playing. The stage is
beautifully
decorated. After that, I
was called
to receive flowers and take pictures with teachers. My heart feels as though it's about to leap from my chest. The ceremony went
very
well, and I was
very
proud of the graduation moment that year.
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IELTS essay The most fantastic moment in your life

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  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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