Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The most beautiful cities People visit modern cities for various purposes, some for just travelling, some for business reasons and so on.

The most beautiful cities People visit modern cities for various purposes, some for just travelling, some for business reasons and so on. It is controversial issue which city is the most dazzling and fascinating. However, there are some destinations which are special. From my point of view, taste is personal thing and depend on individuals. First, when someone asked beautiful city you would tell them about well-known cities such as Paris, London or Rome. Each of them has their individual beauty. For example in Rome it is vivid that you can introduce their old culture and architecture. Paris is city for love and romantic. In London, there are a lot of rainy and cozy days. Of course their famous double-decker bus. On the contrary, I am eager to spread information about exotic places such as Africa, Kenya. Less people consider exotic plases as beautiful. In Africa you can meet leos, elephants, giraffes outside the cages. They know the real taste of freedom. Culture of Africans is stunning for every terrestrial. To recapitulate, it is complicated task to choose only one or two city. Our world is full of amazing destinations

The most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 cities

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 visit modern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 for various purposes, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 travelling, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 for business reasons and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on. It is controversial issue which city is the most dazzling and fascinating. However
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 destinations which are special. From my point of view, taste is personal thing and depend on individuals.

First
, when someone asked This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 city you would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 them about well-known You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 such as Paris, London or Rome. Each of them has their individual beauty. For example
 in Rome it is vivid that you can introduce their This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 culture and architecture. Paris is city for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 and romantic. In London, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 rainy and cozy days. Of course
 their This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 double-decker bus.

On the contrary
, I am eager to spread information about exotic places such as Africa, Kenya. Did you mean “fewer”? The noun people is countable.Fewer
Less
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 consider exotic Possible spelling mistake found.placesplanesplatesphasespleasespluses
plases
 as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
. In The comma is probably missing here: “Africa, you”.Africa, you
Africa you
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
Possible spelling mistake found.LeoslessLoslegslensLeon
leos
, elephants, giraffes outside the cages. They know the real taste of freedom. Culture of Africans is stunning for every terrestrial.

To recapitulate, it is complicated
 task to choose This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one or two city. Our world is full of amazing Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.destinations.destinations!destinations?destinations:destinations,destinations;
destinations