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the late night show due to less viewers for the available for the national news had to again bring on the weather and news

the late night show due to less viewers for the available for the national news had to again bring on the weather and news 2bPX6
The author's statement on the decrease in weather and local news on the late-night program lead to increase in the number of complaints that the station received and also the advertising contracts where decreasing. Thus, to increase the number of viewers to the program and avoid losing the advertising revenues it was decided that the they would air weather and local news again on the late night show but the statement mentioned is supporting the case of losing viewers and does not mention particular reasons as to why this is taking or no further steps where taken in finding out the required reason. The, foremost consideration to the statement mention can be that it is possible that the national new coverage was not as good as compared to the new weather or local news. This can be due to lack of sufficient data that is to be provided during national news and also the case that the data provided is similar to the other news channels. This could be the case where the weather coverage and local news had better data and also could be having proper mixed spice needed to attract the audience. Also, the weather and local news is being covered by a female would be helping the channel sore its viewers for the late-night news program. This is not mentioned but could be a case which is not noticed by the channel's ideologists. The weather news could be more fun and involving with all the vfx and graphics appearing on the screen. However, bring back and giving yourself up to the viewers voice is not always necessary that it would bring back the recommended audience rather it would set an example for the public that this could be done if they don't like a specific reporting on the channel which can lead to more drawbacks. So, it is critical to establish a stance by increasing the content and with that increasing the viewers. People will also start to doubt the broadcast of the channel if the thing of accepting to the audience choice continues. Hence, it is not always required to move further as per the audience's choice. The upcoming shows or broadcasts can be improved by changing the representor/speaker for the show or gradually increasing the content. Just like the T. V serial it is your plot and how you want your character to play his role.
The author's statement on the decrease in
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weather
and
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local
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news
on the late-night program lead to increase in the number of complaints that the station received and
also
the advertising contracts where decreasing.
Thus
, to increase the number of
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viewers
to the program and avoid losing the advertising revenues it
was decided
that
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the they
would air
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weather
and
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local
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news
again on the late night
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show
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but
the statement mentioned is supporting the case of losing
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viewers
and does not mention particular reasons as to why this is taking or no
further
steps where taken in finding out the required reason.

The, foremost consideration to the statement mention can be that it is possible that the national
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new
coverage was not as
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good
as compared to the
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new
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weather
or
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local
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news
. This can be due to lack of sufficient data
that is
to
be provided
during national
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news
and
also
the case that the data provided is similar to the other
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news
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channels
. This could be the case where the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weather
coverage and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
had better data and
also
could be having proper mixed spice needed to attract the audience.

Also
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weather
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
is
being covered
by a female would be helping the
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channel
sore its
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viewers
for the late-night
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news
program. This is not mentioned
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but
could be a case which is not noticed by the channel's ideologists. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weather
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news
could be more fun and involving with all the
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vfx
and graphics appearing on the screen.

However
, bring back and giving yourself up to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
viewers
voice is not always necessary that it would bring back the recommended audience
rather
it would set an example for the public that this could
be done
if they don't like a specific reporting on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
channel
which can lead to more drawbacks.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, it is critical to establish a stance by increasing the content and with that increasing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
viewers
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
will
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
to doubt the broadcast of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
channel
if the thing of accepting to the audience choice continues.

Hence
, it is not always required to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
further
as per the audience's choice. The upcoming
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
or broadcasts can be
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improved
by changing the
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representor
/speaker for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
or
gradually
increasing the content.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Just
like the T. V serial it is your plot and how you want your character to play his role.
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IELTS essay the late night show due to less viewers for the available for the national news had to again bring on the weather and news

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