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The author of the argument purportedly state that the number of skateboard users should be banned in plaza store because they have created many problems such as diminish in store owners business, vandalism and so forth. Owners believe that if skateboarding become prohibited, their business return to its previously high levels. However, the premises upon which he puts his claim are fallacious. For the support of which some critical, yet ignored question need to be addressed. First the author contends that the number of skateboard users reduce the business of store owners. However, it does not lend credence to the argument since a question that might arise is whether skateboarding has deleterious effects on the business of plaza store owners or not. One point that should be considered is that economic recession can run every business into a huge problem and plaza store owners are not exception of this rule. In fact, inflation not only in plaza but also in every mall could contribute greatly to the reduction of business prosperity. It's also important to say that in today's hectic world, there are, majorities of shopping malls and maybe people are less likely to go shopping in plaza every day. The author also attributes that presence of skateboards users caused dramatic increase in vandalism and litter. Although it might seems tenable at face, it has some detects since you can always ask this question if in what extent skateboard users can destroy public things and effects negatively on surrounding area. One of the main, if not the only, problem with the premise is that crowds of people in plaza are in rush, moving in and moving out. There is possibility that these people can bring many damages to the plaza store. Finally as set forth by the author city ban skateboarding in central plaza will help store owners to return their previous stage. Nevertheless, the rationale behind the premise could be challenged owing to an unsettle question if prohibit skateboarding provide fertile ground for owners to reach their previously high level in plaza or not. One point that should not go unnoticed is that skateboarding is an enjoyable activity that can appeal vast majorities of people to the plaza. Indeed, there is possibility that many people go there because of skateboard users and if authorities banned skateboarding in plaza, perhaps the store owners lose their customers. In other word, skateboard users can be served as an advertisement for plaza store owners. Having scrutinized the premises, a logical conclusion that can be drawn is that there are a number of questions, having been ignored by the author while the answer of which could add to the logic of each premises.
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state that the number of skateboard
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users
should
be banned
in
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plaza
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store
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because
they have created
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many
problems such as diminish in
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store
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owners
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business
, vandalism and
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so
forth.
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Owners
believe that if skateboarding become prohibited, their
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business
return to its previously high levels.
However
, the premises upon which he puts his claim are fallacious. For the support of which
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some
critical,
yet
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ignored
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question
need to
be addressed
.

First
the
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author
contends that the number of skateboard
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users
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reduce
the
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business
of
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store
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owners
.
However
, it does not lend credence to the argument since a
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question
that might arise is whether skateboarding has deleterious effects on the
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business
of
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plaza
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store
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owners
or not. One point that should
be considered
is that economic recession can run every
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business
into a huge problem and
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plaza
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store
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owners
are not
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exception of
this
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rule
. In fact, inflation not
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only
in
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plaza
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also
in every mall could contribute
greatly
to the reduction of
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business
prosperity. It's
also
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important
to say that in
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today
's hectic world, there are, majorities of shopping malls and maybe
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people
are less likely to go shopping in
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plaza
every day.

The
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author
also
attributes that presence of skateboards
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users
caused dramatic increase in vandalism and litter. Although it might
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seems
tenable at face, it has
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some
detects since you can always ask this
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question
if in what extent skateboard
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users
can
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destroy
public things and effects
negatively
on surrounding area. One of the main, if not the
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only
, problem with the
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premise
is that crowds of
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people
in
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plaza
are in rush, moving in and moving out. There is possibility that these
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people
can bring
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many
damages to the
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plaza
store.

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Finally
as set forth by the
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author
city ban skateboarding in central
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plaza
will
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help
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store
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owners
to return their previous stage.
Nevertheless
, the rationale behind the
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premise
could
be challenged
owing to
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an unsettle
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question
if prohibit skateboarding provide fertile ground for
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owners
to reach their previously high level in
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plaza
or not. One point that should not go unnoticed is that skateboarding is an enjoyable activity that can appeal vast majorities of
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people
to the
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plaza
.
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, there is possibility that
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many
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people
go there
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of skateboard
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users
and if authorities banned skateboarding in
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plaza
, perhaps the
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store
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owners
lose their customers. In other word, skateboard
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users
can
be served
as an advertisement for
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plaza
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store
owners.

Having scrutinized the premises, a logical conclusion that can
be drawn
is that there are a number of
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questions
, having been
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ignored
by the
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while the answer of which could
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add
to the logic of each
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premises
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IELTS essay Plaza store owners

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
449 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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