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The importance of etiquette in life

Nowadays, etiquette is regarded as the most important skill and character of successful people. It is also beneficial to those who seek a job or want to be hired somewhere However, the new generations are less eager to learn it and therefore they won't succeed in their life. Etiquette varies greatly from country to country. For instance, in France during lunch and dinner time, people hold fork in their left hand, but they hold the knife in their right hand. Furthermore, when a person want to get a job, they must pay attention to their dignity and credibility, because it is the most prominent criterion for hiring someone. Although all people shake their hands with each other while greeting, Chinese people solely bend over and greet each other. On a final note, etiquette can be a tremendous and effective way to reach our goals and be successful.

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However
, the new generations are less eager to learn it and therefore
 they won't succeed in their life. Etiquette varies greatly
 from country to country. For instance
, in France during lunch and dinner time, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 hold fork in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 hand, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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Furthermore
, when a person want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
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 a job, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 pay attention to their dignity and credibility, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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 it is the most prominent criterion for hiring someone. Although all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 shake their hands with each other while greeting, Chinese You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
solely
 bend over and greet each other.

On a final note, etiquette can be a tremendous and effective way to reach our goals and be successful. 