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The impact that the growing demand for more flights has had on he environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people travelling by air is to increase tax on flights

The impact that the growing demand for more flights has had on he environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people travelling by air is to increase tax on flights DxAa
Toady, we live in 21st century and technology reaches its peak. Due to advancement in technology, air transportation is introduced. It influence environment very badly and it is major issue for many nations. Some people opine that rise in taxes on air travelling is a good solution for reducing the number of ai passengers. According to me, this method is not much effective. My reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs. Most of the passengers travelling by air means are rich or belongs to the high community. The number of individuals from mediocre class are very smaller than the rich class. If the price of tickets increases due to rise in tax, then it will not effect high community but it can be effective in reducing number of travellers from mediocre families. Overall, thee would not be large difference seen. So, this resolution is not beneficial to limit the number of people travelling by air. Nevertheless, the funds collected by money due to increase in prices of tickets and taxes on air tansport can be used for welfare of folk and improvement of environment. This money should be given to scientists, so that they can research and invent eco-friendly fuels which can be used in airplanes, and air transportation will become safe for environment. Moreover, this money can be used in planting trees specially near the airports as tees can absorb obnoxious gases and also reduce noise pollution. Before putting my pen down, I concluded that levying moe tax will not influence the growing demand for more flights, but it can be useful in reducing other environment issues like deforestation, air and noise pollution.
Toady, we
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live
in 21st century and technology reaches its peak. Due to advancement in technology,
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air
transportation
is introduced
. It
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influence
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environment
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very
badly
and it is major issue for
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many
nations.
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Some
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people
opine that rise in
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taxes
on
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air
travelling is a
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good
solution for reducing the
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number
of
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ai
passengers.
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According to me
, this method is not much effective. My reasons will be
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explained
in the following paragraphs.

Most of the passengers travelling by
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air
means are rich or belongs to the high community. The
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number
of individuals from mediocre
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class
are
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very
smaller than the rich
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class
. If the price of tickets increases due to rise in
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tax
, then it will not
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effect
high community
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but
it can be effective in reducing
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number
of
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travellers
from mediocre families.
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, thee would not be large difference
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seen
.
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So
, this resolution is not beneficial to limit the
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number
of
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people
travelling by air.

Nevertheless
, the funds collected by money due to increase in prices of tickets and
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taxes
on
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air
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tansport
can be
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used
for welfare of folk and improvement of
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environment
. This money should be
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given
to scientists,
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so
that they can research and invent eco-friendly fuels which can be
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used
in airplanes, and
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air
transportation will become safe for
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environment
.
Moreover
, this money can be
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used
in planting trees
specially
near the airports as tees can absorb obnoxious gases and
also
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reduce
noise pollution.

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Before
putting my pen down, I concluded that levying
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moe
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tax
will not influence the growing demand for more flights,
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but
it can be useful in reducing other
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environment
issues like deforestation,
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air
and noise pollution.
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IELTS essay The impact that the growing demand for more flights has had on he environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people travelling by air is to increase tax on flights

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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