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The governments should close companies that produce toxic

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It is true that many manufacturing industries in most countries are damaging our planet by disposing of their toxic waste irresponsibly. This is endangering our planet and environmentalists suggest that the governments should lock down those industrial plants which lack proper waste management facilities. I completely agree to this notion in the best interest of our next generations. The governments should close companies that produce toxicThe governments should close companies that produce toxicThe governments should close companies that produce toxicThe governments should close companies that produce toxicThe governments should close companies that produce toxicThe governments should close companies that produce toxicThe governments should close companies that produce toxic
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IELTS essay The governments should close companies that produce toxic

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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