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It is common these day to see celebrities advertising different products. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

It is common these day to see celebrities advertising different products. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages. moNq
Nowdays the various products were advertised by different celebrities by supporting the company. Product advertising by celebrities has both benifits and drowbacks. Both positive and negative asspects are discussed in following paragraph. To begin with, the advertising by celebrities certainly benefits indivituals products with different situations. Firstly, people these day trust celebrity and use that products which was advertised by celebrity. That’s why company gave money to celebrities for advertising their products. Likewise, the products differentiating from others brands. The main advantage of this trend was expansion of product world wide. Similarly, it is also an increases economy. On the other hand, the main drawback was the cost involved in this promotional activity. It was increased the overall cost of the product. Apart from this, Financially incapacitated companies can not sign a celebrity to promote their brands. In the same way Companies which are able to spend a huge amount of money on advertisements care the biggest beneficiaries of this trend. Sometimes, negative publicity of the celebrity has a direct impact on the revenue of the company. To conclude, celebrity advertising was indeed a powerful marketing strategy. Moreover, it can positively affect the perception and purchase intentions of the customer. I believe, the benefit in terms of trust and reliability outweight any drawbacks.
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the various
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products
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different
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celebrities
by supporting the
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company
.
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Product
advertising by
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celebrities
has both
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benifits
and
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. Both
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asspects
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begin
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celebrities
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indivituals
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products
with
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different
situations.
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,
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people
these day trust
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celebrity
and
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use
that
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products
which
was advertised
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celebrity
. That’s why
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company
gave money to
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celebrities
for advertising their
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products
.
Likewise
, the
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products
differentiating from others brands. The main advantage of this trend was expansion of
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product
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world wide
.
Similarly
, it is
also
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increases
economy.

On the other hand
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the
overall
cost of the
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product
. Apart from this,
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companies
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sign
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celebrity
to promote their brands.
In the same way
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Companies
which are able to spend a huge amount of money on advertisements care the biggest beneficiaries of this trend.
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Sometimes
,
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negative
publicity of the
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celebrity
has a direct impact on the revenue of the
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company
.

To conclude
,
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celebrity
advertising was
indeed
a powerful marketing strategy.
Moreover
, it can
positively
affect the perception and
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purchase
intentions of the customer. I believe, the benefit in terms of trust and reliability
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outweight
any drawbacks.
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IELTS essay It is common these day to see celebrities advertising different products. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

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