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The gap between the rich and the poor has been enlarged in recent years. What are the causes and solutions for this problem?

The gap between the rich and the poor has been enlarged in recent years. What are the causes and solutions for this problem? AjGNw
Every society is divided into two classes that are rich and poor class. In modern times, the gap between these classes is expanded. There are numerous reasons behind it, but with proper solutions, this gap can be subsided. This essay will discuss the causes of this problem and give solutions to solve this issue. The foremost reason for this issue is corruption in the economic system of nations. Political leaders are evading their responsibilities. In other words, they are helping the business class to make more money in the form of tax evasion and in return rich people offer them a bribe. Consequently, the rich are becoming more rich and poor people are suffering because prices are shooting up like rockets in every sector. Another reason is unemployment in job sectors. As poor people are not getting jobs that is why it becomes hard for them to survive or to run their house but on the other hand, rich people are running their business and they transfer their inherited estate to their offsprings. Hence, the rich remain rich and the poor remain poor in the world. Furthermore, reservation in the employment sector is also a hindrance. For example, In developing countries such as India, the Pakistan caste system is very popular and in job sectors, preference is given to lower caste people due to which the people belong to a higher caste, do not get the opportunity to attain a job. As a result, capitalism is increasing in the community. There are some solutions to uproot this problem. Firstly, corruption should be eradicated from the community. Corrupt political leaders should be not be elected in elections. Next, large inherited properties should be divided into public so that every person can get a piece of land. Moreover, small scale industries should be encouraged so that people can sell their commodities in the market and earn some money. In other words, importing foreign goods in a country should be limited. In this way, a problem could be abolished from the nation. In conclusion, the gap between rich and poor could be decreased if proper solutions are followed by the public or nations.
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into two
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classes
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rich
and
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poor
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class
. In modern times, the gap between these
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classes
is expanded
. There are numerous reasons behind it,
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but
with proper
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solutions
, this gap can
be subsided
. This essay will discuss the causes of this problem and give
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solutions
to solve this issue.

The foremost reason for this issue is corruption in the economic system of nations. Political leaders are evading their responsibilities.
In other words
, they are helping the business
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class
to
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make
more money in the form of tax evasion and in return
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rich
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people
offer them a bribe.
Consequently
, the
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rich
are becoming more
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rich
and
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poor
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people
are suffering
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because
prices are shooting up like rockets in every sector.

Another reason is unemployment in
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job
sectors. As
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poor
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people
are not getting
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jobs
that is
why it becomes
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hard
for them to survive or to run their
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house
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but
on the other hand
,
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rich
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people
are running their
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business and
they transfer their inherited estate to their
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offsprings
.
Hence
, the
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rich
remain
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rich
and the
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poor
remain
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poor
in the world.
Furthermore
, reservation in the employment sector is
also
a hindrance.
For example
, In
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developing countries
such as India, the Pakistan caste system is
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very
popular and in
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job
sectors, preference is
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given
to lower caste
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people
due to which the
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people
belong to a higher caste, do not
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get
the opportunity to attain a
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job
.
As a result
, capitalism is increasing in the community.

There are
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some
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solutions
to uproot this problem.
Firstly
, corruption should
be eradicated
from the community. Corrupt political leaders should be not
be elected
in elections.
Next
, large inherited properties should
be divided
into public
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so
that every person can
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get
a piece of land.
Moreover
,
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small
scale industries should
be encouraged
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so
that
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people
can sell their commodities in the market and earn
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some
money.
In other words
, importing foreign
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goods
in a country should
be limited
. In this way, a problem could
be abolished
from the nation.

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In
conclusion, the gap between
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rich
and
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poor
could
be decreased
if proper
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solutions
are followed
by the public or nations.
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IELTS essay The gap between the rich and the poor has been enlarged in recent years. What are the causes and solutions for this problem?

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