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The Extinction of animals is part of a natural process that we as human beings should not interfere with. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The Extinction of animals is part of a natural process that we as human beings should not interfere with. with this statement? Nrkdm
As the humans have progressed in technology the nature has gone for a toss. Due to advancements in the technology, urbanization has paced a greater speed as compared to the last decade. This has led to global warming, pollution, cutting down of trees, extinction of animals and what not. So, homo sapiens are fully in charge of the extinction of animals. The dying of the animal species is not at all a natural process, it is directly or indirectly linked to the actions of the human beings. Mankind can take plethora of steps in order to Minimalize the extinction of rare creatures. To begin with, people can avail battery cars instead of the traditional pollution causing vehicles. This will bring down the pollution index at a greater extent. People can commute by public transport or can carpool using different user interactive web applications. Another way that can be opted to protect the extinction of animals is by planting huge amount of trees, which will in turn become home to many wild creatures. Those homes can be named as wild sanctuaries where people can visit as a tourist place. This will create a good revenue to the government, as well as solve the problems of extinction permanently. While some illiterate people wrangle that the disappearance of some creatures is God's wish which is totally illogical. Scientific studies with facts and figures have given as evidence that it is human that have shaken the Eco biological cycle. To conclude from the aforementioned arguments, it is not a natural process that has caused to the reduction of the rare species but it is the man who has his hand to the consequences and should adapt eco friendly methods in order to survive happily for the coming Centuries.
As the humans have progressed in technology the nature has gone for a toss. Due to advancements in the technology, urbanization has paced a greater speed as compared to the last decade. This has led to global warming, pollution, cutting down of trees,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
extinction
of animals and what not.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, homo sapiens are
fully
in charge of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
extinction
of animals.

The dying of the animal species is not at all a natural process, it is
directly
or
indirectly
linked to the actions of the human beings. Mankind can take plethora of steps in order to
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Minimalize
the
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extinction
of rare creatures. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with,
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people
can avail battery cars
instead
of the traditional pollution causing vehicles. This will bring down the pollution index at a greater extent.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
can commute by public transport or can carpool using
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
user interactive web applications.

Another way that can
be opted
to protect the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
extinction
of animals is by planting huge amount of trees, which will in turn become home to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
wild creatures. Those homes can
be named
as wild sanctuaries where
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can visit as a tourist place. This will create a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
revenue to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
,
as well
as solve the problems of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
extinction
permanently
.

“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
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some
illiterate
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people
wrangle that the disappearance of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
creatures is God's wish which is
totally
illogical. Scientific studies with facts and figures have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
as evidence that it is human that have shaken the Eco biological cycle.

To conclude
from the aforementioned arguments, it is not a natural process that has caused to the reduction of the rare species
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but
it is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
who has his hand to the consequences and should adapt
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eco friendly
methods in order to survive
happily
for the coming Centuries.
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IELTS essay The Extinction of animals is part of a natural process that we as human beings should not interfere with. with this statement?

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