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The diagram below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery.

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The set of maps illustrates the present as well as future expected layout plans for the reconstruction of an art gallery. Analyzing the former map, in a present time an entrance of the art gallery is on the east side. And after the entrance, the art gallery has one lobby along with the office. After the lobby, two temporary exhibition spaces and one permanent exhibition space rooms are available. The western part is not included in the art gallery. A Parkinson court is located on the northern side of the art gallery. Focusing on the latter maps, which represent the expected plan of the gallery. The entrance of the art gallery would be change and relocated from the Parkinson court. The second change, the lobby and office would convert in an education area along with a store/plant. In addition, center area of the art gallery shall be developed as permanent exhibition area instead of two temporary exhibition area. And also, two room would be added on the western side, one is special exhibition and another one is exhibition store. Overall, it is observed that the several changes can occur in a future in the art gallery. While a number of rooms would be added in predicted layout.
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as well
as future
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layout plans for the reconstruction of an
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art
gallery.

Analyzing the former map, in a present time an entrance of the
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art
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gallery
is on the east side. And after the entrance, the
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art
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gallery
has one lobby along with the office. After the lobby, two temporary exhibition spaces and one permanent exhibition space rooms are available. The western part is not included in the
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art
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gallery
. A Parkinson court
is located
on the northern side of the
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art
gallery.

Focusing on the latter maps, which represent the
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expected
plan of the
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gallery
. The entrance of the
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art
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gallery
would be
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change
and relocated from the Parkinson court. The second
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change
, the lobby and office would convert in an education
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area
along with a store/plant.
In addition
, center
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area
of the
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art
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gallery
shall
be developed
as permanent exhibition
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area
instead
of two temporary exhibition
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area
. And
also
, two room would be
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added
on the western side, one is special exhibition and another one is exhibition store.

Overall
, it
is observed
that the several
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changes
can occur in a future in the
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art
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gallery
.
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a number of rooms would be
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IELTS essay The diagram below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery.

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4 paragraphs
207 words
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