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The day l changed my mind

The day l changed my mind KnKlL

Changes in our life is the best impressive event to achieve our future. Every person came across with unforgettable changes their life. Firstly l want to share the best changes in my life which was happened in my childhood. When l was 3 years old l began to read and learn Islamic words. How it was beautiful and surprisingly to attract my mind. Every word and phrase has a lot of meaning and idioms in it. And my elder brother also interested in Islam. we both together tried to learn by heart each single phrase in order to understood and repeated poems in by heart. At that moment l changed not only my mind but also my body and my opinions suddenly changed to good position. In sum up changes will help to choose to right place in our future life. Because of changing we stand in our good position.

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