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the benefits of the cellphone

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the cellphones day by day popular and becoming more convenient, that is the reason make the cell phone having a lot of kinds of phones in the market. It is obvious that the cellphone is very beneficial to our lives. The cellphone is side by side, shoulder to shoulder with humans everywhere and everywhen in the cases. Which is the characteristic of a cellphone, extremely convenient. In terms of communication, cellphone enable people to have wider connect with someone from different parts of the world, even via applications in the cellphone such as FB, Zalo, IG. . . thank the cellphone everyone can keep in touch from distance. The cellphone entitles people to access an enormous bank of information and knowledge update on social networks and website. People can research necessary materials for studying, teaching, and other purposes of education, besides, the higher popularity of the cellphone is extremely advantageous in the learning, teaching, and working process, especially during the covid -19 pandemic. there is a fact, more and more people using a cellphone in order to target entertainment like listening music, watching films, . . .
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beneficial to our
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in the cases. Which is the characteristic of a cellphone,
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convenient. In terms of communication, cellphone enable
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people
to have wider connect with someone from
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different
parts of the world, even via applications in the cellphone such as FB,
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Zalo
, IG.
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the cellphone everyone can
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in touch from distance. The cellphone entitles
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people
to access an enormous bank of information and knowledge update on social networks and website.
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can research necessary materials for studying, teaching, and other purposes of education,
besides
, the higher popularity of the cellphone is
extremely
advantageous in the learning, teaching, and working process,
especially
during the
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covid
-19 pandemic.
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there
is a fact, more and more
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people
using a cellphone in order to target entertainment like listening music, watching films
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IELTS essay the benefits of the cellphone

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
187 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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