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the benefits of having good time management skills

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To live independently, we should have a number of skills and one of the most important skills is time management. Having this skills can help us a lot of advantages. Firstly, it is easy for us to control our time. For instance, we can split time for our tasks like prioritizing for the important work, spending less time doing unnecessary ones. By this way, we do not feel anxious that we have not enough time to finish all assignments. Secondly, having good time-management skills also help us save lots of time. It means, when we arrange and spend amount of time for one task, we may do this task on time and not forget it. Thanks to that, we can have much free time to do anything that they want such as relaxing, learning new language, etc so as to gaining in-depth knowledge. Finally, Being independent is one of the benefits of time-management skills. When we have skills to arrange suitably and finish our assignment on time, we will practise how to do work by ourselves and live independently. It is so useful for us when we do not live with parents or we study in university. In short, having good time-management skills have numerous benefits so our student should practice it right now.
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time
for our tasks like prioritizing for the
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important
work, spending less
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time
doing unnecessary ones. By this way, we do not feel anxious that we have not
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enough
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to finish all assignments.
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us save lots of
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time
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for one task, we may do this task on
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and not forget it. Thanks to that, we can have much free
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to do anything that they want such as relaxing, learning new language, etc
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gaining in-depth knowledge.
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time
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have numerous benefits
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IELTS essay the benefits of having good time management skills

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
214 words
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