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Technology generates language translation software's which leads decrease in importance of learning more different languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Technology generates language translation software's which leads decrease in importance of learning more different languages. PVE1E
Language is a medium to communicate with the different cultural part of the world. It is observed that in this contemporary era, jargon transition software's have reduced the significance of learning different dialect. I completely agree with the statement because the purpose and scope of learning a new terminology have been lost since technological advancements have been made. To commence with, The main reason i agree is that a plethora of multi-lingual workspace tasks can be done using these applications even though an individual is not aware of the accent. This is because the facility of fast conversion from one speech to another with accuracy and adequate format is provided by the apps. To illustrate, it is well known that google translate can transform into plentiful languages with a single click. Therefore, the purpose of learning a accent has been declined as an enormous amount of office work can be done in a foreign expression with the help of advanced applications. Another reason why I agree is that the vast majority of people do not feel the need for learning as they already have a substantial amount of technological bundle to automate their work. The reason for this is that we do not need to learn until we need to communicate in different languages. For example, The majority of Canadian citizens speak English however, a large part of the population communicate in french unless somebody needs to travel to the french dominated province they do not need to learn the language. Thus, applications have created to make our life simpler and a person does not need to speak in a different speech in order to have a conversation in a different region apart from their mother tongue. To conclude, I strongly agree that social media and online apps have taken over the jargon centres and deteriorated the purpose of learning diverse accent in this 20th century. As a, result many public societies can only speak one word.
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is a medium to communicate with the
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different
cultural part of the world. It
is observed
that in this contemporary era, jargon transition software's have
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reduced
the significance of
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learning
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different
dialect. I completely
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agree
with the statement
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because
the purpose and scope of
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learning
a new terminology have
been lost
since technological advancements have
been made
.

To commence with, The main reason
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i
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agree
is that a plethora of multi-lingual workspace tasks can
be done
using these applications
even though
an individual is not aware of the accent. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the facility of
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fast
conversion from one speech to another with accuracy and adequate format
is provided
by the apps. To illustrate, it is well known that
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google translate
can transform into plentiful
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languages
with a single click.
Therefore
, the purpose of
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learning
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accent has
been declined
as an enormous amount of office work can
be done
in a foreign expression with the
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help
of advanced applications.

Another reason why I
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agree
is that the vast majority of
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people
do not feel the
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need
for
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learning
as they already have a substantial amount of technological bundle to automate their work.
The reason for this is
that we do not
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need
to learn until we
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need
to communicate in
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different
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languages
.
For example
, The majority of Canadian citizens speak English
however
, a large part of the population communicate in
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french
unless somebody
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needs
to travel to the
"French" needs to be capitalized when not used as a verb.
french
dominated province they do not
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need
to learn the
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language
.
Thus
, applications have created to
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make
our life simpler and a person does not
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need
to speak in a
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different
speech in order to have a conversation in a
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different
region apart from their mother tongue.

To conclude
, I
strongly
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agree
that social media and online apps have taken over the jargon
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centres
and deteriorated the purpose of
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learning
diverse accent in this 20th century. As
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result
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many
public societies can
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only
speak one word.
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IELTS essay Technology generates language translation software's which leads decrease in importance of learning more different languages.

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