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And now I will tell you about the process of forming and developing teamwork. Teamwork includes 4 processes. Firstly, is the forming stage: this is the stage when separate individuals will form a group, there will be excitement and expectation but also quite anxiety and nervousness. The second is the storming stage. This is the period when conflicts arise, individuals reveal their personalities; as a result, it leads to slow progress in the work. The next is the norming stage, all conflicts will be resolved, then the relationship between individuals and groups is stabilized and mutual trust between each other. Finally, is the performing stage, by now team members work together easily on interdependent tasks. This is the highest development stage of teamwork, trust, harmony, and strong cohesion among members to create perfect teamwork.
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Teamwork includes 4 processes.
Firstly
, is the forming
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: this is the
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when separate individuals will form a group, there will be excitement and expectation
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also
quite anxiety and nervousness. The second is the storming
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stage
. This is the period when conflicts arise, individuals reveal their personalities;
as a result
, it leads to slow progress in the work. The
next
is the
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norming
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stage
, all conflicts will
be resolved
, then the relationship between individuals and groups
is stabilized
and mutual trust between each other.
Finally
, is the performing
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, by
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team members work together
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on interdependent tasks. This is the highest development
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of teamwork, trust, harmony, and strong cohesion among members to create perfect teamwork.
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IELTS essay Talk about process of teamwork

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
134 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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