Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking
1. Latest Topics
2. Speaking Club

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard in Question 2, explaining how they answer specific problems raised in the reading in Question 1. You should write at least 150 words.

Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard in Question 2, explaining how they answer specific problems raised in the reading in Question 1. xgjPo

The reading talks about the staff decided unexpectedly to retire early, while the lecture suggests various solutions to the early retirement problem, many older individuals are not looking for full-time work But many would be prepared to work part-time. To begin with, the reading mentions many workers become burned out as a result of doing the same responsibilities and they become quite dull since daily activities no longer present a challenge. As a solution, the professor suggests if they work part-time, they will not be able to go to regular employment. As a result, they don't grow weary. Moreover, Allowing people to work part-time would also keep their thoughts fresh, preventing them from becoming bored with their employment. Secondly, the reading says that there are comparisons exist between young and elderly staff. The professor advises that teenagers believe they know everything, yet their experiences pale in comparison to those of a 50 or 60-year-old, so companies might consult more regularly with their older staff Not only would these efforts make them feel desired but they would also rely on their many years of corporate experience

The reading talks about the staff decided unexpectedly
 to retire early, while the lecture suggests various solutions to the early retirement problem, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 older individuals are not looking for full-time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 would be prepared
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 part-time.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the reading mentions This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 workers become burned out as a result
 of doing the same Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).responsibilities, and
responsibilities and
 they become quite dull since daily activities no longer present a challenge. As a solution, the professor suggests if they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 part-time, they will not be able to go to regular employment. As a result
, they don't grow weary. Moreover
, Allowing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 part-time would also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 their thoughts fresh, preventing them from becoming bored with their employment.

Secondly
, the reading says that there are comparisons exist between young and elderly staff. The professor advises that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 believe they know everything, yet
 their experiences pale in comparison
 to those of a 50 or 60-year-This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 might consult more regularly
 with their older staff Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 would these efforts This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them feel desired This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they would also
 rely on their This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 years of corporate Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphexperience.experience!experience?experience:experience,experience;
experience