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Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard in Question 2, explaining how they answer specific problems raised in the reading in Question 1. You should write at least 150 words.

Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard in Question 2, explaining how they answer specific problems raised in the reading in Question 1. xgjPo
The reading talks about the staff decided unexpectedly to retire early, while the lecture suggests various solutions to the early retirement problem, many older individuals are not looking for full-time work But many would be prepared to work part-time. To begin with, the reading mentions many workers become burned out as a result of doing the same responsibilities and they become quite dull since daily activities no longer present a challenge. As a solution, the professor suggests if they work part-time, they will not be able to go to regular employment. As a result, they don't grow weary. Moreover, Allowing people to work part-time would also keep their thoughts fresh, preventing them from becoming bored with their employment. Secondly, the reading says that there are comparisons exist between young and elderly staff. The professor advises that teenagers believe they know everything, yet their experiences pale in comparison to those of a 50 or 60-year-old, so companies might consult more regularly with their older staff Not only would these efforts make them feel desired but they would also rely on their many years of corporate experience
The reading talks about the staff decided
unexpectedly
to retire early, while the lecture suggests various solutions to the early retirement problem,
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many
older individuals are not looking for full-time
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work
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But
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many
would
be prepared
to
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work
part-time.

To
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begin
with, the reading mentions
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many
workers become burned out
as a result
of doing the same
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responsibilities and
they become quite dull since daily activities no longer present a challenge. As a solution, the professor suggests if they
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work
part-time, they will not be able to go to regular employment.
As a result
, they don't grow weary.
Moreover
, Allowing
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people
to
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work
part-time would
also
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keep
their thoughts fresh, preventing them from becoming bored with their employment.

Secondly
, the reading says that there are comparisons exist between young and elderly staff. The professor advises that
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teenagers
believe they know everything,
yet
their experiences pale
in comparison
to those of a 50 or 60-year-
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old
,
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so
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companies
might consult more
regularly
with their older staff Not
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only
would these efforts
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make
them feel desired
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but
they would
also
rely on their
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many
years of corporate
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experience
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IELTS essay Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard in Question 2, explaining how they answer specific problems raised in the reading in Question 1.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
184 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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