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Studying privately versus with a group of studens

Studying privately versus with a group of studens 5GOP
Introduction: Learning is a complicated activity as well as there are a variety of styles about keeping information. Two styles of learning are alone studying, also with a team, so that keeping the information’s ways are reduced naturally. While some differences between being a team and privately are superficial, the similarities are salient. Body Paragraph 1: However, the lonely style is possessed some disadvantages quailities, or those backgrounds are changeable by studens. One of them is the isolating, so this style is opposite the learning because topics, which are permanantly, consistently learn with another person, or people. On the other hand, minor of people prefer studying privately to the no isolating type of learning. Meanwhile, the prefering of privately does not share absent itself, so that learning is more adventurely by those people as opposite as a small of people understands more quickly and easy than other type of group. Additionally, if you would rather to learn isolatingly, you have independent study style; for instance, you do not have to report to group leader for your duty. Body Paragraph 2: Furthermore, if you eligible to work with a team, you will be successful under the topic. In class, you are learning and listening with your classmates as well as you will have a network for your future. The most important thing is that you eligible to ask to your teacher, when you do not understand a topic, which you will be more confidendlty to learn, so that you are sharing your knowledge to people, and then the knowledge becomes more numerous, also permanent. Therefore, you have a responsibility against your teammembers and your teacher, so you are dependend on your leader in the group. Body paragraph 3: Not only they possess comparing quailities, but also they have contrast stuff. Both of them provide learning within a good way, that is depent on the indivisual. Conclusion: To conclude, although they bear some minor similarities, the differences between both types of studying are pronunced. With a team or not with a group are related with the person. In general, subjects sometimes confuse human’s brain as a plenty of path are there to take some knowledge.
Introduction:

Learning is a complicated activity
as well
as there are a variety of
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styles
about keeping information. Two
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styles
of
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learning
are alone studying,
also
with a
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team
,
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so
that keeping the information’s ways are
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reduced
naturally
. While
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some
differences between being a
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team
and
privately
are superficial, the similarities are salient.

Body Paragraph 1:

However
, the lonely
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style
is possessed
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some
disadvantages
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quailities
, or those backgrounds are changeable by
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studens
. One of them is the isolating,
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so
this
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style
is opposite the
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learning
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because
topics, which are
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permanantly
,
consistently
learn with another person, or
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people
.
On the other hand
, minor of
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people
prefer studying
privately
to the no isolating type of
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learning
. Meanwhile, the
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prefering
of
privately
does not share absent itself,
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so
that
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learning
is more
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adventurely
by those
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people
as opposite as a
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small
of
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people
understands more
quickly
and easy than other type of group.
Additionally
, if you would
rather
to learn
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isolatingly
, you have independent study
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style
;
for instance
, you do not
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have to
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report to group
leader for your duty.

Body Paragraph 2:

Furthermore
, if you eligible to work with a
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team
, you will be successful under the topic. In
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class
, you are
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learning
and listening with your classmates
as well
as you will have a network for your future. The most
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important
thing is that you eligible to
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ask to
your teacher, when you do not understand a topic, which you will be more
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confidendlty
to learn,
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so
that you are sharing your knowledge to
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people
, and then the knowledge becomes more numerous,
also
permanent.
Therefore
, you have a responsibility against your
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teammembers
and your teacher,
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so
you are
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dependend
on your leader in the group.

Body paragraph 3:

Not
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only
they possess comparing
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quailities
,
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but
also
they have contrast stuff. Both of them provide
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learning
within a
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good
way,
that is
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depent
on the
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indivisual
.

Conclusion:

To conclude
, although they bear
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some
minor similarities, the differences between both types of studying are
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pronunced
. With a
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team
or not with a group
are related
with the person.
In general
, subjects
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sometimes
confuse human’s brain as a
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plenty of path
are there to take
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some
knowledge.
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IELTS essay Studying privately versus with a group of studens

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
363 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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