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Students at school and university have to take too many tests and exams. These tests make it harder to teach and harder to learn and put students under unnecessary pressure. Is this a fair comment?

Students at school and university have to take too many tests and exams. These tests make it harder to teach and harder to learn and put students under unnecessary pressure. Is this a fair comment? oRb0K
In recent years educational institutions have started taking more exams to gauge their pupil's knowledge. However, it is believed that such trends have led to difficulties in imparting lessons for the teachers and retaining power of the students, finally causing mental and pshycological negative impact on the children. In my opinion, it is fair to say that such a pressure is causing invariable issues and something should be done to have a balance in teaching and taking exams. Moreover, the children are put in such a position that they do not get to enjoy outdoor activities or play. This however would make them dull and curbs their imagination. Additionally, the university going students have to work hard to achieve good grades since their future job depends on how well they have scored in their graduation. Therefore, they miss out on many practical lessons of life, like taking up extra curricular activities or internships. For that matter, nowadays, schools have unit tests, Weekly tests, half year tests and many more such tests and finally they would reach their annual test. Education has become more burdensome for the current generation as the system does not understand what the children need to learn. It would be seen as a welcome change as the Ministers of education put more efforts in changing such archaic system. Ideally, there should be two tests in every session with practical and fun ways to teach them. Firstly, this would help teachers get attention of their pupils. Secondly, colleges should provide real world experience to graduates and help them with adjusting in new work environment. In Conclusion, I think it is fair to suggest that educational institutes should curb the exam system and make changes. This would be more helpful for the students in long run and i hope they realize that our new generation of youngsters deserve better not burden.
In recent years educational institutions have
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started
taking more exams to gauge their pupil's knowledge.
However
, it
is believed
that such trends have led to difficulties in imparting lessons for the teachers and retaining power of the students,
finally
causing mental and
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pshycological
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negative
impact on the children. In my opinion, it is
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fair
to say that such a pressure is causing invariable issues and something should
be done
to have a balance in teaching and taking exams.

Moreover
, the children
are put
in such a position that they do not
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get
to enjoy outdoor activities or play. This
however
would
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make
them dull and curbs their imagination.
Additionally
, the university going students
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have to
work
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hard
to achieve
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good
grades since their future job depends on how well they have scored in their graduation.
Therefore
, they miss out on
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many
practical lessons of life, like taking up
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extra curricular
activities or internships. For that matter, nowadays, schools have unit
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tests
, Weekly
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, half year
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tests
and
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many
more such
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and
finally
they would reach their annual
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. Education has become more burdensome for the
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current
generation as the system does not understand what the children need to learn.

It would be
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seen
as a welcome
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change
as the Ministers of education put more efforts in changing such archaic system.
Ideally
, there should be two
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tests
in every session with practical and fun ways to teach them.
Firstly
, this would
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help
teachers
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get
attention of their pupils.
Secondly
, colleges should provide real world experience to graduates and
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help
them with adjusting in new work environment.

In Conclusion
, I
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think
it is
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fair
to suggest that educational institutes should curb the exam system and
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make
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changes
. This would be more helpful for the students in long run and
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hope they realize that our new generation of youngsters deserve better not burden.
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IELTS essay Students at school and university have to take too many tests and exams. These tests make it harder to teach and harder to learn and put students under unnecessary pressure. Is this a fair comment?

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