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space exploration

space exploration 56NeQ

The lecture and the passage both are about the private space exploration. The author of the passage claims that it will benefit scientific discoveries and humans. The lecturer challenges the several claim made by the author. He is of the point that it won't benefit humans. Firstly, the author says that privatization will make the space flight cheaper due to competition which will benefit both the space tourist and scientist for their discoveries. The lecturer rebuts this statement by saying that instead of being cheaper it will be more dear. Making space traffic control systems and verifying the safety measures will fuel up the cost instead of bringing it down. Secondly, the writer of the passage says that privatization will increase the scientific discoveries and will make the industry grow giving more employement to scientist. The lecturer argues with the statement by saying that many private companies will lure the scientist by giving more money. As a result of this they will mosllty concentrate on their private research instead of goverment research work. Finally, the author posists that the expense of space travel will be borne by their customers which will reduce the burden on tax payers. The lecturer contests this statement by saying that it takes billions of dollars to make space station airport and this money cannot be raised from customers so instead of lowering the burden on tax payers it will increase their burden.

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space
 exploration. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproducercreatorwritercolumnistjournalistcomposer
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 of the passage claims that it will benefit scientific discoveries and humans. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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lecturer
 challenges the Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: "several claims".several claims
several claim
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author
. He is of the point that it won't benefit humans.

Firstly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproducercreatorwritercolumnistjournalistcomposer
author
 says that privatization will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslotarenacapacityzoneareaspot
space
 flight cheaper due to competition which will benefit both the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslotarenacapacityzoneareaspot
space
 tourist and scientist for their discoveries. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofessorinstructor
lecturer
 rebuts this statement by saying that instead
 of being cheaper it will be more dear. Making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslotarenacapacityzoneareaspot
space
 traffic control systems and verifying the safety measures will fuel up the cost instead
 of bringing it down.

Secondly
, the writer of the passage says that privatization will increase the scientific discoveries and will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the industry grow giving more Possible spelling mistake found.employment
employement
 to scientist. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofessorinstructor
lecturer
 argues with the statement by saying that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 private This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 will lure the scientist by giving more money. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 a result of this they will Possible spelling mistake found.mostlyMollyMosleyMoseleymolly
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 concentrate on their private research instead
 of Possible spelling mistake found.government
goverment
 research work.

Finally
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproducercreatorwritercolumnistjournalistcomposer
author
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posists
 that the expense of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslotarenacapacityzoneareaspot
space
 travel will be borne
 by their customers which will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the burden on tax payers. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofessorinstructor
lecturer
 contests this statement by saying that it takes billions of dollars to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslotarenacapacityzoneareaspot
space
 station airport and this money cannot be raised
 from customers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
instead
 of lowering the burden on tax payers it will increase their burden. 