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Some schools are very strict about their school uniform and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code.

Some schools are very strict about their school uniform and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. N35bg
Writing Task 2 Essay for IELTS Millions of schools worldwide struggle with facing school uniform issues. Governments and schools around the globe demand that students are obligated to wear a school uniform, for example black and white. These uniforms are boring and monotonous. Although quite a few individuals state that pupils have to wear a school uniform, I firmly believe that school uniform is unnecessary due to modern principles. The following essay aims to explore this topic by providing relevant ideas and evidence. Above all, I have a deep desire to emphasize that school uniforms are unimportant in our rapidly developing society. Moreover I hold the view that comfort surpasses the Idea of looking identical to each other. For example, my cousin's school keeps a freestyle type of uniform so their learners will not feel funny or uncomfortable in school. Secondly, I tend to shed light on that aspect of self-expression which was killed by the exact same uniform for schools. I feel it is essential to mention that every person is a mess of creativity and individuality so schools cannot restrict the younger generation from wearing colourful and comfortable outfits. For instance, recently, there was a strike in California against the dress code because of that reason. On the other hand, it stands to reason that school uniforms bring equality to everybody, which perfectly illustrate the current status of the world. Furthermore, it's obvious for us that dress code is improving our discipline and obedience, which are the most useful skills in our era. In summary, taking all things into account, I am confident to restate that. I would like to remove the dress code or at least make it bespoke for every school for the sake of the children.
Writing Task 2

Essay for IELTS

Millions of
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schools
worldwide struggle with facing
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school
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uniform
issues.
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Governments
and
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schools
around the globe demand that students
are obligated
to wear a
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school
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uniform
,
for example
black and white. These
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uniforms
are boring and monotonous. Although quite a few individuals state that pupils
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have to
wear a
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school
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uniform
, I
firmly
believe that
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school
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
uniform
is unnecessary due to modern principles. The following essay aims to explore this topic by providing relevant
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ideas
and evidence.

Above all
, I have a deep desire to emphasize that
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school
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uniforms
are unimportant in our
rapidly
developing society.
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Moreover
I hold the view that comfort surpasses the
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Idea
of looking identical to each other.
For example
, my cousin's
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school
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keeps
a freestyle type of
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uniform
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so
their learners will not feel
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funny
or uncomfortable in school.

Secondly
, I tend to shed light on that aspect of self-expression which
was killed
by the exact same
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uniform
for
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schools
. I feel it is essential to mention that every person is a mess of creativity and individuality
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so
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schools
cannot restrict the younger generation from wearing
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colourful
and comfortable outfits.
For instance
, recently, there was a strike in California against the dress code
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because
of that reason.

On the other hand
, it stands to reason that
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school
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uniforms
bring equality to everybody, which
perfectly
illustrate the
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current
status of the world.
Furthermore
, it's
The adjective 'obvious' is normally used with 'to': "obvious to us".
obvious for us
that dress code is improving our discipline and obedience, which are the most useful
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skills
in our era.

In summary, taking all things into account, I am confident to restate that. I would like to remove the dress code or at least
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it bespoke for every
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school
for the sake of the children.
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IELTS essay Some schools are very strict about their school uniform and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
291 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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