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Some poeple think that teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility.

Some poeple think that teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. rBdJ
A great number of humans feel that adolescent age is the most joyful period of life. However, most persons believed in adulthood at the happiest time of existence. This easy, will x-ray the juvenile years as the most exciting life cycle owing to life of dependency and exploration of the world around, whereas, it will not completely dispute that a few jubilations are also derived at Middle age despite the difficult task they are exposed to. Understandably, stages of life which commence from childhood to old age, has a diversity of responsibilities attached to each. The adult time is marked by hectic challenges of which they are meant to cater for single-handedly. Consequently, they get exposed to lots of hurdles which allows them little or no moment of pleasure. For instance, in my neighbourhood, a 30 and 35years wife and husband respectively, who have 6 youngsters they are taking care of have become so busy with managing their three business establishments to the extent that they barely sleep at night not to talk of experience the world around. Nevertheless, some adults who beliefs that, “all works without play makes Jack a dull boy" still manages to take some time off work and catch such funs like: watching football match, going to picnics, holiday outings etc. On the other hand, teenagers are full of freedom, as such, they take complete control of their time, utilise all opportunities within their reach as they seek for development. Taking different tertiary institutions into consideration, more energetic activities are associated with this young population. For example: competitions, website developments, games, cultism, academic excellence etc. This is because, at this point, they are being cared for by others which enables them to concentrate perfectly on ways of achieving greater goals and self bourgeois, as a result, this tends to be the most euphoric period of living. In conclusion, in my opinion, I concur with the early periods of life as the peak of joyful moments of people's life because, they are free from struggles. Some adults are deprived of many celebrations due to quest to fulfil the needs pressing on them. Therefore, I recommend that, the government should device a means of providing assistance to parents and guidance in carrying their many obvious responsibilities. A great number of humans feel that adolescent age is the most joyful period of life. However, most persons believed in adulthood at the happiest time of existence. This easy, will x-ray the juvenile years as the most exciting life cycle owing to life of dependency and exploration of the world around, whereas, it will not completely dispute that a few jubilations are also derived at Middle age despite the difficult task they are exposed to. Understandably, stages of life which commence from childhood to old age, has a diversity of responsibilities attached to each. The adult time is marked by hectic challenges of which they are meant to cater for single-handedly. Consequently, they get exposed to lots of hurdles which allows them little or no moment of pleasure. For instance, in my neighbourhood, a 30 and 35years wife and husband respectively, who have 6 youngsters they are taking care of have become so busy with managing their three business establishments to the extent that they barely sleep at night not to talk of experience the world around. Nevertheless, some adults who beliefs that, “all works without play makes Jack a dull boy" still manages to take some time off work and catch such funs like: watching football match, going to picnics, holiday outings etc. On the other hand, teenagers are full of freedom, as such, they take complete control of their time, utilise all opportunities within their reach as they seek for development. Taking different tertiary institutions into consideration, more energetic activities are associated with this young population. For example: competitions, website developments, games, cultism, academic excellence etc. This is because, at this point, they are being cared for by others which enables them to concentrate perfectly on ways of achieving greater goals and self bourgeois, as a result, this tends to be the most euphoric period of living. In conclusion, in my opinion, I concur with the early periods of life as the peak of joyful moments of people's life because, they are free from struggles. Some adults are deprived of many celebrations due to quest to fulfil the needs pressing on them. Therefore, I recommend that, the government should device a means of providing assistance to parents and guidance in carrying their many obvious responsibilities.
A great number of humans feel that adolescent
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age
is the most
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joyful
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period
of
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life
.
However
, most persons believed in adulthood at the happiest
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time
of existence. This easy, will x-ray the juvenile years as the most exciting
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life
cycle owing to
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life
of dependency and exploration of the
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world
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around
, whereas, it will not completely dispute that a few
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jubilations
are
also
derived at Middle
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age
despite the difficult task they are
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exposed
to.
Understandably
, stages of
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life
which commence from childhood to
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old
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age
, has a diversity of
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responsibilities
attached to each. The adult
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time
is marked
by hectic challenges of which they
are meant
to cater for single-
handedly
.
Consequently
, they
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get
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exposed
to lots of hurdles which
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allows
them
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little
or no
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moment
of pleasure.
For instance
, in my
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neighbourhood
, a 30 and 35years wife and husband
respectively
,
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who
have 6 youngsters they are taking care of have become
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so
busy with managing their three business establishments to the extent that they
barely
sleep at night not to talk of experience the
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world
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around
.
Nevertheless
,
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some
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adults
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who
beliefs that, “all works without play
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makes
Jack a dull boy
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"
still
manages to take
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some
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time
off
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work
and catch such
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funs
like: watching football match, going to picnics, holiday outings etc. On the
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other
hand,
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teenagers
are full of freedom, as such, they take complete control of their
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time
,
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utilise
all opportunities within their reach as they seek for
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development
. Taking
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different
tertiary institutions into consideration, more energetic activities
are associated
with this young population.
For example
: competitions, website
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
developments
, games, cultism, academic excellence etc. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
, at this point, they are
being cared
for by others which enables them to concentrate
perfectly
on ways of achieving greater goals and self bourgeois,
as a result
, this tends to be the most euphoric
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
period
of living.
In conclusion
, in my opinion, I concur with the early
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
periods
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
as the peak of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
joyful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
moments
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's
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life
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
, they are free from struggles.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
adults
are deprived
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
celebrations due to quest to fulfil the needs pressing on them.
Therefore
, I recommend that, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should device a means of providing assistance to parents and guidance in carrying their
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
obvious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
responsibilities
. A great number of humans feel that adolescent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
is the most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
joyful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
period
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
.
However
, most persons believed in adulthood at the happiest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
of existence. This easy, will x-ray the juvenile years as the most exciting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
cycle owing to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
of dependency and exploration of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
around
, whereas, it will not completely dispute that a few
Possible spelling mistake found.
jubilations
are
also
derived at Middle
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
despite the difficult task they are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exposed
to.

Understandably
, stages of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
which commence from childhood to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
, has a diversity of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
responsibilities
attached to each. The adult
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
is marked
by hectic challenges of which they
are meant
to cater for single-
handedly
.
Consequently
, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exposed
to lots of hurdles which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
them
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
or no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
moment
of pleasure.
For instance
, in my
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.
neighbourhood
, a 30 and 35years wife and husband
respectively
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
have 6 youngsters they are taking care of have become
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
busy with managing their three business establishments to the extent that they
barely
sleep at night not to talk of experience the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
around
.
Nevertheless
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
adults
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
beliefs that, “all works without play
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
Jack a dull boy
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
still
manages to take
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
off
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
and catch such
Possible spelling mistake found.
funs
like: watching football match, going to picnics, holiday outings etc.

On the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
are full of freedom, as such, they take complete control of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
,
Possible spelling mistake. 'utilise' is British English.
utilise
all opportunities within their reach as they seek for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
development
. Taking
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
tertiary institutions into consideration, more energetic activities
are associated
with this young population.
For example
: competitions, website
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
developments
, games, cultism, academic excellence etc. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
, at this point, they are
being cared
for by others which enables them to concentrate
perfectly
on ways of achieving greater goals and self bourgeois,
as a result
, this tends to be the most euphoric
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
period
of living.

In conclusion
, in my opinion, I concur with the early
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
periods
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
as the peak of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
joyful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
moments
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
, they are free from struggles.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
adults
are deprived
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
celebrations due to quest to fulfil the needs pressing on them.
Therefore
, I recommend that, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should device a means of providing assistance to parents and guidance in carrying their
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
obvious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
responsibilities
.
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IELTS essay Some poeple think that teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
756 words
6.0
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