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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. GVae
It is a debatable issue that the misunderstandings between children and their guaidians is fruitful or not However, i tend toward formal view which is elaborated with relevent ideas of this issue in Subsequential paragraphs. To begin with, my own point of view that argues between parents and their offsprings are essential because by it teenager become able to deal with further obstracles of their life. As they are lighted by their parents during the arguments, how to deal with problems children learn various things during that time by which they can easly go through their life journey smoothly. Along with that their ocean of knowledge also enhance due to their parents because they know everything and every aspects of life which they pars out during their own time period. if teenagers remain in the shade of their parents they quickly understand the matter of everything by seeing their guardians, such as how they they calm during deep shocks. it also make them perfect to take decison regarding things like which is best for them or which is not while the conflicts. For instance, A survey was conducted during 2015 in which most of children go aganist their guardians and resulted im bad consequences, but those who previous discuss it with their parents remain better to selecting wrong paths. Preoponents, who feel that conflicts lead wrong impact on teenagers because it increased the stress level of children as well as parents due to the regular issues children get irritated and start neglacting their own guardians and fell hagistation to reveal anything with them. It resulted in weeken of their strong relantionship. when they not feel comfortable with parents and start hidding the serious issues, it resulted in wrost consequence because then no one left to tackle their problems, may it lead to sucides, as well as other harmful acitivities too. when their relations turned into long distance relationship then they can start including into bad companies as well as it also divert their mind from their main prospectives. In conclusion, i still opine that arguements between parents and teenagers produce effective results which makes their future more bright but guardians should they also provide some space to children for common discuions otherwise, they missed their cruail days of raising age in pressure of life.
It is a debatable
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issue
that the misunderstandings between
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children
and their
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guaidians
is fruitful or not
However
,
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i
tend toward formal view which
is elaborated
with
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relevent
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ideas
of this
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issue
in
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Subsequential
paragraphs. To
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begin
with, my
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own
point of view that argues between
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parents
and their
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offsprings
are essential
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because
by it
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teenager
become able to deal with
further
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obstracles
of their
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life
. As they
are lighted
by their
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parents
during the arguments, how to deal with problems
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children
learn various things during that time by which they can
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easly
go through their
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life
journey
smoothly
. Along with that their ocean of knowledge
also
enhance due to their
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parents
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because
they know everything and every
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aspects
of
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life
which they
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pars
out during their
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own
time period.
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if
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teenagers
remain in the shade of their
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parents
they
quickly
understand the matter of everything by seeing their guardians, such as how
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they they
calm during deep shocks.
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it
also
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make
them perfect to take
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decison
regarding things like which is best for them or which is not while the conflicts.
For instance
, A survey
was conducted
during 2015 in which most of
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children
go
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aganist
their guardians and resulted
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im
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bad
consequences,
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but
those who previous discuss it with their
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parents
remain better to selecting
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wrong
paths.
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Preoponents
, who feel that conflicts lead
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wrong
impact on
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teenagers
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because
it increased the
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stress
level of
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children
as well
as
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parents
due to the regular
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issues
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children
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get
irritated and
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start
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neglacting
their
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own
guardians and fell
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hagistation
to reveal anything with them. It resulted in
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weeken
of their strong
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relantionship
.
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when
they not feel comfortable with
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parents
and
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start
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hidding
the serious
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issues
, it resulted in
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wrost
consequence
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because
then no one
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left
to tackle their problems, may it lead to
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sucides
,
as well
as other harmful
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acitivities
too.
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when
their relations turned into long distance relationship then they can
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start
including into
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bad
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companies
as well
as it
also
divert their mind from their main
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prospectives
.
In conclusion
,
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i
still
opine that
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arguements
between
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parents
and
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teenagers
produce effective results which
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makes
their future more bright
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but
guardians should they
also
provide
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some
space to
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children
for common
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discuions
otherwise
, they missed their
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cruail
days of raising age in pressure of
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life
.
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IELTS essay Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided.

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  American English
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