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Some people think the news has no real connection to people’s lives, so reading newspapers or watching news programmes on television is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that a person’s life has no real connection with the news, therefore, we should not see the news channels on he television and read newspapers as they are just the wastage of our precious time. I completely disagree with this statement as the news provide us with useful information and they should us the glimpse of life of people around us. A good reason in support of my viewpoint is that the news shown in TV is not a fictional story, but about the real life of people in our area. In other words, the people shown in news could be our relatives and the news serve as a means of telling that person’s unfortunate condition to us. In addition to that, the news reports also tells us in what situation what should we do. If the news describes the story of a young man who catches a shoplifter, it some how, inspires us to do the same, if something like this happens to us in the future. Another point to consider is that the news gives us useful information to keep in pace with the world. If our country’s diplomatic relations are not good with other country, we can know about it from news and refrain to travel to that particular country. Also, we get to know about any kind of power-cut or medical emergency in our area from the news. Furthermore, the news helps us to stay alert. If there is any serial killer in our neighbourhood, with the help of the newspapers, we could know about it in advance and save our lives by staying at home. In conclusion, the news has a deep connection with our real lives and with their help we get to know about many incidences and it also helps us to know what is happening not only in our country but also around the world.
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channels on he television and read newspapers as they are
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the wastage of our precious time. I completely disagree with this statement as the
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provide us with useful information and they should us the glimpse of life of
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around us.

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reason in support of my viewpoint is that the
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shown in TV is not a fictional story,
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about the real life of
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people
in our area.
In other words
, the
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people
shown in
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news
could be our relatives and the
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serve as a means of telling that person’s unfortunate condition to us.
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to that, the
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reports
also
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us in what situation what should we do. If the
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the story of a young
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how, inspires us to do the same, if something like this happens to us in the future.

Another point to consider is that the
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gives us useful information to
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in pace with the world. If our
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diplomatic relations are not
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with other
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country
, we can
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know
about it from
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and refrain to travel to that particular
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.
Also
, we
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about any kind of power-
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or medical emergency in our area from the
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.
Furthermore
, the
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helps
us to stay alert. If there is any serial killer in our neighbourhood, with the
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help
of the newspapers, we could
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know
about it in advance and save our
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lives
by staying at home.

In conclusion
, the
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has a deep connection with our real
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lives
and with their
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help
we
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in our
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around the world.
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IELTS essay Some people think the news has no real connection to people’s lives, so reading newspapers or watching news programmes on television is a waste of time.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
316 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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