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Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people's lives in negatives ways. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, there is a heated argument over the issue that media have been influnced individual's lives in adverse ways. A chunk of the community welcomes the conception whereas the remaining members oppose the same. In this essay, I would discuss a number if studies, which would show that this perspective is 'to some extent' justified. To begin with, there are a number of irrefutable arguments in favor of my stance. The most conspicuous one is increasing crime rate. It is also possible to say that people whenever watching different crime petrol programs, they are influenced by abnormal behavior and promotes to do regarding this issues. Moreover, juvenile delinquency is escalating day by day by using various media such as TV shows, Facebook, twitter and so on. one good example is, a recent study by Queens university found that, in the last two years 20% crime rate was increased by using various news media. My viewpoint can be made evident by adding few more arguments, different media advertising creates artificial needs for human and subtly pressure for persuading unnecessary things. To justify my stance there is an example of that, children pester their parents to buy advertising products which they watch news media. On the other hand, I do have some ground arguments against the central idea. First and foremost, by using media people can obtain knowledge and also be able to connect with different language and culture. Secondly, media could be connected between government and people. Thirdly, various advertisements inform people a lot of choices. For example, by accessing media we can connect with the contemporary era. To put in a nutshell, I personally believe that media have various negative effects which are affecting our daily life, however, the letter one should not be glossed over.
In the contemporary era, there is a heated
argument
over the issue that
media
have been
influnced
individual's
lives
in adverse ways. A chunk of the community welcomes the conception whereas the remaining members oppose the same. In this essay, I would discuss a number if studies, which would
show
that this perspective is 'to
some
extent' justified.

To
begin
with, there are a number of irrefutable
arguments
in favor of my stance. The most conspicuous one is increasing crime rate. It is
also
possible to say that
people
whenever watching
different
crime petrol programs, they
are influenced
by abnormal behavior and promotes to do regarding
this
issues.
Moreover
, juvenile delinquency is escalating
day by day by
using
various
media
such as TV
shows
, Facebook,
twitter
and
so
on. one
good
example is, a recent study by Queens university found that, in the last two years 20% crime rate
was increased
by using
various
news
media
. My viewpoint can
be made
evident by adding few more
arguments
,
different
media
advertising creates artificial needs for human and
subtly
pressure for persuading unnecessary things. To justify my stance there is an example of that, children pester their parents to
buy
advertising products which they
watch
news media.

On the other hand
, I do have
some
ground
arguments
against the central
idea
.
First
and foremost, by using
media
people
can obtain knowledge and
also
be able to connect with
different
language and culture.
Secondly
,
media
could
be connected
between
government
and
people
.
Thirdly
,
various
advertisements inform
people
a lot of
choices.
For example
, by accessing
media
we can connect with the contemporary era.

To put in a nutshell, I
personally
believe that
media
have
various
negative
effects which are affecting our daily life,
however
, the letter one should not
be glossed
over.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people's lives in negatives ways.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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