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Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level. However some says that individual should pay for their university education. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level. However some says that individual should pay for their university education. Discuss both views and give your opinion 2BQb
In the modern era, education is the most important asset in each one life. While this will improve every individual's standard of living to another level such as in health, wealth, social and affects their self-esteem. In my opinion, each person has the right to education, if they are paying for their university qualification they will have the responsibility to study hard and achieve as best as they can. In university education, if they are paying for their studies, students will value their responsibility and do as much as possible. Whereas the age and time they are joining in the college are the crucial time of life to explore new things with their new peer groups such as alcohol, cocaine, and other opioids. It will affect their studies and social and behavioral development. Free education will never teach them the value of money. The college-going student should know the value of money and how to spend it. If the studies are free of cost they would have extra money for spending on their day to day life, most of the parents are sending their children to a different city as they want them to learn how to grow up in a new place and to make their life smooth, they pour money on them, but they are not thinking how badly it will affect their children life. For example, more cash, lavish life, like before getting a licence they could have to get a bike. They may think money will protect them from every crime. It's a big threat to their social life. As most of the children after their school have no money for their higher education. Many parents are not financially stable to afford a large amount of tuition fee. In that case, the government can provide them free of college education, for that they can do some exams for the students such as entrance exams. It may help most of the brilliant students who don't have money to build up their future and also helps their parents to be proud. However, education has an important role in everyone life, as we are building a new world with technologies, each one of us has to be a good human being. Education will help us to grow up. So learning from only books are not important, how to live a life is also important. if we pay for our education, we will be more conscious about our studies and also will learn how to manage in our life.
In the modern era,
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education
is the most
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important
asset in each one
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life
. While this will
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improve
every individual's standard of living to another level such as in health, wealth, social and affects their self-esteem. In my opinion, each person has the right to
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education
, if they are paying for their university qualification they will have the responsibility to
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study
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hard
and achieve as
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best
as they can. In university
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education
, if they are paying for their
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studies
,
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students
will value their responsibility and do as much as possible. Whereas the age and time they are joining in the college are the crucial time of
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life
to explore
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new
things with their
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new
peer groups such as alcohol, cocaine, and other opioids. It will affect their
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studies
and social and behavioral development. Free
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education
will never teach them the value of
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money
. The college-going
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student
should know the value of
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money
and how to spend it. If the
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studies
are free of cost they would have extra
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money
for spending on their
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day to day
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life
, most of the parents are sending their children to a
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different
city as they want them to learn how to grow up in a
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new
place and to
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make
their
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life
smooth, they pour
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money
on them,
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but
they are not thinking how
badly
it will affect their children
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life
.
For example
, more cash, lavish
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life
, like
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before
getting a
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licence
they could
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get
a bike. They may
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think
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money
will protect them from every crime. It's a
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big
threat to their social
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life
. As most of the children after their school have no
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money
for their higher
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education
.
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Many
parents are not
financially
stable to afford a large amount of tuition fee.
In that case
, the
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government
can provide them free of college
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education
, for that they can do
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some
exams for the
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students
such as entrance exams. It may
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help
most of the brilliant
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students
who don't have
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money
to build up their future and
also
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helps
their parents to be proud.
However
,
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education
has an
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important
role in everyone
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life
, as we are building a
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new
world with technologies, each one of us
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has to
be a
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good
human being.
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Education
will
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help
us to grow up.
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So
learning from
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only
books are not
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important
, how to
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live
a
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life
is
also
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important
.
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if
we pay for our
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education
, we will be more conscious about our
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studies
and
also
will learn how to manage in our
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life
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level. However some says that individual should pay for their university education. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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