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Some people think that the development of technology has made our life more complex, and the solution is to live a simpler life without that technology. Do you agree or disagree

Some people think that the development of technology has made our life more complex, and the solution is to live a simpler life without that technology. RNNWV
In past few decades, the advancement of Technology is increased exponentially. it is often believed by few section of society that advanced technology are made human life more arduous, however living a simple life without Technology is only solution. I do not deny that Technological inventions have affect people' life, but this does not mean that eradicate technology from life is made easier lifestyle.
In past few decades, the advancement of
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of society that advanced
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are made
human
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more arduous,
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living a simple
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without
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is
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solution. I do not deny that Technological inventions have affect
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,
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is made
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IELTS essay Some people think that the development of technology has made our life more complex, and the solution is to live a simpler life without that technology.

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64 words
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