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Some people think that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel for cars and other vehicles. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel for cars and other vehicles. m19QK
Traffic congestion and pollution have become major problems worldwide. Pollution is particularly worse in the big cities. While it is possible that higher petrol prices will solve the traffic and pollution problems to a great extent, raising the price of oil is not the best solution. However, I believe that other measures are more effective. The main reason why raising the fuel prices is not the right solution is that it is the short-term measure. Although it might cut the number of vehicles on the road, it largely affects the prices of food and other goods. For instance, in India, my home country, everything relies on the transport. If petrol prices increase, the prices of commodities in the market will also increase. This will lead to inflation in the market which has a big domino impact on what people end up paying even for a slice of bread. A better solution is to find measures that will work in the long run. To illustrate, escalating the investment in alternative fuels and improving public transport are more effective measures than increasing petrol prices. Traffic and pollution problems will not be solved until people start using the public transport. For this reason, the government should make public transport available at cheap rates and prohibit cars from city centres. To conclude, this essay discussed how the growing population and worsening air quality have made it imperative for governments and people to adopt change and cut the use of private transport. However, in my opinion, increasing the cost of petrol is not the right solution for traffic congestion. Instead of taking this drastic measure, governments should invest in public transport and clean fuel.
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congestion and
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pollution
have become major problems worldwide.
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is
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particularly worse
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cities. While it is possible that higher
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petrol
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prices
will solve the
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traffic
and
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pollution
problems to a great extent, raising the
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price
of oil is not the best
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solution
.
However
, I believe that other
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measures
are more effective.

The main reason why raising the fuel
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prices
is not the right
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solution
is that it is the short-term
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measure
. Although it might
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cut
the number of vehicles on the road, it
largely
affects the
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prices
of food and other
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goods
.
For instance
, in India, my home country, everything relies on the
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transport
. If
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petrol
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prices
increase, the
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prices
of commodities in the market will
also
increase. This will lead to inflation in the market which has a
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big
domino impact on what
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people
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end
up paying even for a slice of bread.

A better
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solution
is to find
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measures
that will work in the long run. To illustrate, escalating the investment in alternative fuels and improving
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public
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transport
are more effective
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measures
than increasing
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petrol
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prices
.
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Traffic
and
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pollution
problems will not
be solved
until
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people
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start
using the
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public
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transport
.
For this reason
, the
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government
should
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make
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public
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transport
available at
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cheap
rates and prohibit cars from city
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To conclude
, this essay discussed how the growing population and worsening air quality have made it imperative for
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governments
and
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people
to adopt
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change
and
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cut
the
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use
of private
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transport
.
However
, in my opinion, increasing the cost of
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petrol
is not the right
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solution
for
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traffic
congestion.
Instead
of taking this drastic
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measure
,
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governments
should invest in
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public
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transport
and clean fuel.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel for cars and other vehicles.

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