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Some people think that school should reward student how show the academic result. While other believe it is more important who reward who show improvement. Discuss both of view .give your opinion.

Some people think that school should reward student how show the academic result. While other believe it is more important who reward who show improvement. give your opinion. km7n
Reward is the big achievement. It show of hard work, talent e. t. c. view of most of people its only deserved for those words how show the academic results. But other think that it's very necessary who show interest for achievement. Every individual have different mindset so they keep different think. I will give my view afterdiscuss both of opinion in the following paragraphs. To commence with, get reward is very important for good performance in academic result. Its help to more better and more improve own self. Its gave of motivation.
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IELTS essay Some people think that school should reward student how show the academic result. While other believe it is more important who reward who show improvement. give your opinion.

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  American English
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