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Some people think that rich countries should not employ skilled labour from poor contries to what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people think that rich countries should not employ skilled labour from poor contries Aak5n

Brain drain, which is the major cause of migration, is seen globally. Rich countries should not employ skilled labours from poor countries as poor countries need them more. However, I am inclined to think in the opposite direction I would like to explicate in the following paragraphs. To begin, the first and the foremost thought is everybody wants to pursue greener pastures. In order to it, lured by the offerings, people go for picking up migration as the only solution. Some skilled workers, people well versed with their profession facing unemployment end up resettling themselves in rich countries providing favourable opportunities. In addition, it would not only benefit the sufferer but also would prove a great asset for building up the economy of the specific nation, which would ultimately lead to escalating better employment. People having a dauntless attitude towards work has Stressless thought regarding means of earning money as for which the price to pay is work harder and longer hours. Time After Time, such practices are seen, as referring to the past, for instance, nomads wandered from one place to another in search of food and shelter. Just going on the similar path, people today also adopt such measures to afford to live up to the fullest. Therefore, it is crucial for rich countries provide a platform for employment opportunities for migrates as well as the get benefited by the outcomes and gradually, resulting in overall development. Moreover, as a social standpoint taken from poor countries' aspect, they need skilled workers more as compared to developed Nations. As to build up a better place to live in, the chief or the prime concern would be a good proficient group. Instead of shifting to other religions, one needs to toil hard in his own vicinity doing some good for his country or region, to level it up from his prior stage. Furthermore, it would ultimately possess some benefits to substandard Nations. In conclusion, I pen down, saying that for living a privileged life one needs to buckle up his shoe whenever opportunity knocks on to the door, no matter, what means would be preferred.

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seen
 globally. Rich You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 should not employ skilled Possible spelling mistake. 'labours' is British English.labors
labours
 from poor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 as poor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
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need
 them more. However
, I am inclined
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 in the opposite direction I would like to explicate in the following paragraphs.

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begin
, the first
 and the foremost This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
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 is everybody wants to pursue greener pastures. In order to it, lured by the offerings, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 go for picking up migration as the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 solution. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 skilled workers, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 well versed with their profession facing unemployment This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up resettling themselves in rich You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 providing Possible spelling mistake. 'favourable' is British English.favorable
favourable
 opportunities. In addition
, it would not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 benefit the sufferer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 would prove a great asset for building up the economy of the specific nation, which would ultimately
 lead to escalating better employment. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 having a dauntless attitude towards work has Possible spelling mistake found.Stress less
Stressless
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 regarding means of earning money as for which the price to pay is work harder and longer hours. Time After Time, such practices are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
, as referring to the past, for instance
, nomads wandered from one place to another in search of food and shelter. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
 going on the similar path, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
also
 adopt such measures to afford to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 up to the fullest. Therefore
, it is crucial for rich You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 provide a platform for employment opportunities for migrates as well
 as the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 benefited by the outcomes and gradually
, resulting in overall
 development.

Moreover
, as a social standpoint taken from poor countries' aspect, they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 skilled workers more Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
as
 compared to developed Nations. As to build up a better place to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in, the chief or the prime concern would be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 proficient group. Instead
 of shifting to other religions, one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
needs
 to toil This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 in his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 vicinity doing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for his You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 or region, to level it up from his prior stage. Furthermore
, it would ultimately
 possess This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 benefits to substandard Nations.

In conclusion
, I pen down, saying that for living a privileged life one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
needs
 to buckle up his shoe whenever opportunity knocks on to the door, no matter, what means would be preferred
. 