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Some people think that it is better for a country’s economy for people to spend money while others believe

Some people think that it is better for a country’s economy for people to spend money while others believe GMdQe
It is argued that spending is a good choice to to the economic rather than keeping money because that aids improvement of their states and boosting tourism industry. Spending moteraty in the country is the best way not only increase their money but also to develop finincial of the country. That means if persons spend their cashes in their communities that will improve the ficilities such as schools and hospitals. Non keeper money coperate in many developments and investments in their local areas through that they attract a huge number of tourists from a round the world. On the others hand, some people save their instead of expend it They ensure its will not lost in the investments or flow out their country which is not nessaciry as saving its for harsh situtions for example, healthcare especially when they got old or children's eductions. To counclude, using money is useful for the communities to change their lives and economic.
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is argued
that spending is a
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good
choice
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to to
the economic
rather
than keeping
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money
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because
that aids improvement of their states and boosting tourism industry. Spending
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moteraty
in the country is the best way not
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only
increase their
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money
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but
also
to develop
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finincial
of the country. That means if persons spend their cashes in their communities that will
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improve
the
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ficilities
such as schools and hospitals. Non keeper
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money
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coperate
in
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many
developments and investments in their local areas through that they attract a huge number of tourists from a round the world. On the others hand,
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some
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people
save their
instead
of expend it They ensure its will not
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lost
in the investments or flow out their country which is not
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nessaciry
as saving its for harsh
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situtions
for example
, healthcare
especially
when they
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got
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old
or children'
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s eductions
. To
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counclude
, using
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money
is useful for the communities to
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change
their
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lives
and economic.

IELTS essay Some people think that it is better for a country’s economy for people to spend money while others believe

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  American English
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159 words
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