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Some people think that it is always an advantage to buy local products rather than those made in other countries. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that it is always an advantage to buy local products rather than those made in other countries. 7dr2
All the nations in the world are either trying to show their dominance in a certain field or are moving towards being self-dependent and this encouraged the production of several products locally. A number of people tend to believe that buying a local made product is always considered better than buying those made in some other nation. I am completely aligned with this belief. To begin with, locally produced goods provide user with, if not better, comparable quality product to one of the most popular products produced in some other nation at a considerably low cost. For example, herbal products produced in my country cost nearly 50% less than the ones produced outside my country. The major reason for this difference in the cost is import duty, which is imposed on the actual cost of the product while importing the product from other nation. In addition, the shelf life of a few edible products is increased by adding preservatives that would protect the product while it is being transported. Apart from this, spending the money for products manufactured or produced locally will also give boost to the nation’s economy which in turn would strengthen the local currency in global markets. Also, If the demand of the local products is increased, employment in the nation would also increase and this change will eventually reduce the unemployment rate. To conclude, foreign products might look appealing to a few, but buying local products is beneficial for an individual as well as for the country’s economy.
All the
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nations
in the world are either trying to
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show
their dominance in a certain field or are moving towards being self-dependent and this encouraged the production of several
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products
locally
. A number of
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people
tend to believe that buying a
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local
made
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product
is always considered better than buying those made in
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some
other
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nation
. I am completely aligned with this belief.

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begin
with,
locally
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produced
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goods
provide user with, if not better, comparable quality
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product
to one of the most popular
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products
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produced
in
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some
other
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nation
at a
considerably
low
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cost
.
For example
, herbal
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products
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produced
in my country
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cost
nearly
50% less than the ones
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produced
outside my country. The major reason for this difference in the
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cost
is import duty, which
is imposed
on the actual
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cost
of the
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product
while importing the
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product
from other
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nation
.
In addition
, the shelf life of a few edible
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products
is increased
by adding preservatives that would protect the
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product
while it is
being transported
.

Apart from this, spending the money for
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products
manufactured or
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produced
locally
will
also
give boost to the
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nation’s
economy which in turn would strengthen the
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local
currency in global markets.
Also
, If the demand of the
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local
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products
is increased
, employment in the
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nation
would
also
increase and this
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change
will
eventually
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reduce
the unemployment rate.

To conclude
, foreign
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products
might look appealing to a few,
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but
buying
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local
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products
is beneficial for an individual
as well
as for the country’s economy.
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IELTS essay Some people think that it is always an advantage to buy local products rather than those made in other countries.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
252 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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