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Some people think that it is a waste of time for school students to study nature. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that it is a waste of time for school students to study nature. with this statement? J8K5
Nature is an indispensable part of human’s daily life and thus it is a main subject in a large number of countries. However, there are strong arguments in the public against studying the natural environment, mostly based on the thought that spending time on studying nature is mostly wasteful. It is clear that the need for enhancing the knowledge of the natural environment has significantly declined for years. An obvious reason is that students have to learn many other subjects at school, which results in a reduction of necessary time for studying and reviewing nature. In addition, many people believe in a false assumption that the environment is familiar around them and there is no point in studying something that they have experienced since the time of their births. In my opinion, nature has been an integral part with humanity in the entire evolution of human species. Learning about nature provides insights to the relationship between species and many important events which occurred so long ago that shape our lives today. From this knowledge, many challenges can be solved. For example, there was once a time that the average temperature on the globe was much higher than the current average temperature. By discovering how nature reacted and adapted to this unusual incident at that time, it can potentially help us to tackle the problem of global warming. Another reason to counter the opponents of studying nature is that we still do not know much about her. Although humans have achieved many breakthroughs in understanding how nature works, they still have to face many unanswered questions. They just know little of the total species on the earth and even many parts of themselves are still a mystery. Consequently, explorations into the unknown is extremely essential for further understanding of our natural world and humans themselves, which require considerable time for studying. In conclusion, I completely disagree with the idea to stop learning nature and schools must encourage the students to take the nature into account more seriously.
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is an indispensable part of
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human’s
daily life and
thus
it is a main subject in
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a large number of
countries.
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studying
the natural environment,
mostly
based on the
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thought
that spending
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time
on
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studying
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nature
is
mostly
wasteful.

It is
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clear
that the need for enhancing the knowledge of the natural environment has
significantly
declined for years. An obvious reason is that students
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have to
learn
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many
other subjects at school, which results in a reduction of necessary
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time
for
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studying
and reviewing
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nature
.
In addition
,
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many
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people
believe in a false assumption that the environment is familiar around them and there is no point in
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studying
something that they have experienced since the
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time
of their births.

In my opinion,
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nature
has been an integral part with humanity in the entire evolution of
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human
species.

Learning about
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nature
provides insights to the relationship between species and
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many
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important
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events
which occurred
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so
long ago that shape our
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lives
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today
. From this knowledge,

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many
challenges can
be solved
.
For example
, there was once a
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time
that the average temperature on the globe was much higher than the
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current
average temperature. By discovering how
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nature
reacted and adapted to this unusual incident at that
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time
, it can
potentially
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help
us to tackle the problem of global warming.

Another reason to counter the opponents of
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studying
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nature
is that we
still
do not know much about her. Although
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humans
have achieved
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many
breakthroughs in understanding how
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nature
works, they
still
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have to
face
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many
unanswered questions. They
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just
know
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little
of the total species on the earth and even
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many
parts of themselves are
still
a mystery.
Consequently
, explorations into the unknown is
extremely
essential for
further
understanding of our natural world and
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humans
themselves, which require considerable
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time
for studying.

In conclusion
, I completely disagree with the
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idea
to
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stop
learning
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nature
and schools
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must
encourage the students to take the
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nature
into account more
seriously
.

IELTS essay Some people think that it is a waste of time for school students to study nature. with this statement?

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