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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. 7RBb
Many people consider that they ought to detect solutions to survive with climate alteration in place of preventing this terrible situation. This essay disagrees that people should not live with climate change. Firstly, this essay will discuss that to care about climate alteration is a vital issue for surviving in a safe condition, and secondly will give some opinions about importance of its solutions on how to prevent this hazard. On the one hand, climate change is catastrophic threat not only for people but also for our ecosystem. Healthy and unhealthy forests face an increased risk of forest fires because of the warming climate. Unusually, hot and dry weather can cause massive wildfires. In addition to the direct threat from burning, wildfires cause air pollution that can be carried over long distances. The heat is drying forests and making them more susceptible to wildfires. For example, in 2019 Science magazine reported that, climate change has accelerated the death of trees and has made forests across the world younger and shorter. On the other hand, there is already undeniable evidence that animals and plants are being affected by climate change in both their distribution and behaviour. Climate change alters the life cycles of plants and animals. As temperatures get warmer, many plants are starting to grow and bloom earlier in the spring and survive longer into the fall. Some animals are waking from hibernation sooner or migrating at different times, too. As the Earth gets warmer, plants and animals that need to live in cold places. For instance, a 2019 report in BBC confirmed that over one million animal and plant species were at risk. In conclusion, I agree that nowadays to be curious about climate change is significantly necessary not only for forests but also some animal and plant species as each of them has essential value for our nature.
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people
consider that they ought to detect solutions to survive with
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climate
alteration in place of preventing this terrible situation. This essay disagrees that
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people
should not
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live
with
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climate
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change
.
Firstly
, this essay will discuss that to care about
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climate
alteration is a vital issue for surviving in a safe condition, and
secondly
will give
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some
opinions about importance of its solutions on how to
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prevent
this hazard.

On the one hand,
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climate
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change
is catastrophic threat not
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only
for
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people
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also
for our ecosystem. Healthy and unhealthy
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forests
face an increased
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risk
of
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forest
fires
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because
of the warming
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climate
.
Unusually
, hot and dry weather can cause massive wildfires.
In addition
to the direct threat from burning, wildfires cause air pollution that can
be carried
over long distances. The heat is drying
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forests
and making them more susceptible to wildfires.
For example
, in 2019 Science magazine reported that,
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climate
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change
has accelerated the death of trees and has made
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forests
across the world younger and shorter.

On the other hand
, there is already undeniable evidence that
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animals
and
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plants
are being
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affected
by
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climate
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change
in both their distribution and
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behaviour
.
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Climate
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change
alters the life cycles of
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plants
and
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animals
. As temperatures
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get
warmer,
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many
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plants
are starting to grow and bloom earlier in the spring and survive longer into the fall.
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Some
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animals
are waking from hibernation sooner or migrating at
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different
times, too. As the Earth
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gets
warmer,
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plants
and
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animals
that need to
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live
in
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cold
places.
For instance
, a 2019 report in BBC confirmed that over one million
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animal
and
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plant
species were at
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risk
.

In conclusion
, I
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agree
that nowadays to be curious about
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climate
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change
is
significantly
necessary not
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only
for
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forests
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but
also
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some
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animal
and
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plant
species as each of them has essential value for our nature.
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IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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