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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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In nowday, there are some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while the other think it just a waste of time. So in this essay will discuss both views and state my opinion. On the one hand, international sports event can light up the happiness of citizen after a long time were bored in house or raise the flame of passion. Example, after a long time of corona virus days plenty of people had boring in the house so they need a entertainment fun by watching their favorite sport stars playing. On the other hand, events could spent a lot of money to hosting and could distract people unable to finish their own works. For example, if a soccer match was held so plenty of people will go and see it but for children who cannot go would absent the class to have fun with crowds. In conclusion, i think that hostig is a good idea if we limited the action by just held i weekend when everyone have relaxing moments
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in this essay will discuss both views and state my opinion.

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event
can light up the happiness of citizen after a long time
were bored
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or raise the flame of passion. Example, after a long time of
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corona virus
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people
had boring in the
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entertainment fun by watching their favorite sport stars playing.

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unable to finish their
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works.
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for children who cannot go would absent the
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to have fun with crowds.

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if we limited the action by
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weekend when everyone
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relaxing moments

IELTS essay Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
177 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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