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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. MG8e
The view of few people stated that hosting an sports belongs to international is extremely good for the better country as opposed to remaining people thinking it is bad. In my opinion, I moderately agree that motivating international sports in the country leads to grab out the talented sports persons in the country and coach them for future sports events makes country proud. I also agree that interational sport events cause great damage to future youngesters lifes. Firstly, On conducting sports, may be the country gains development, fame, and so many youngsters who has talents will achieve the success in their interests. For instance, consider Cricket, which is very famous in many of the countries, match is conducted between different countries. Playing sports and winning gives the better development of the nation and obtains more chances to participate in future events. On the other hand, conductiong international sports may leads to failure of youngsters lifes. For instance, the youngster only concentrate on sports and neglect the studies, he/she will face more critical problems if the one can't achieve success, because only knowlege on the sports doesn't make his/her career bright. Being an youngerster, as this is the crucial stage in life, they need to concentrate only on the future for better survival in this competation world. In the conclusion, not all international sports events are good for the country, there are some events which are necessary for the today's world to better development of the country. Before hosting the events, countries needs to think about the well-being of the nation.
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stated that hosting an
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belongs to
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international
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for the
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better
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country
as opposed to remaining
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thinking it is
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. In my opinion, I
moderately
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that motivating
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international
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sports
in the
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country
leads to grab out the talented
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sports
persons in the
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country
and coach them for
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future
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sports
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events
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makes
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country
proud. I
also
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agree
that
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interational
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sport
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events
cause great damage to
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youngesters
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lifes
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Firstly
, On conducting
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, may be the
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country
gains development, fame, and
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many
youngsters who
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talents will achieve the success in their interests.
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very
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famous
in
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of the
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countries
, match
is conducted
between
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different
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countries
. Playing
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and winning gives the
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better
development of the nation and obtains more chances to participate in
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future
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events
.

On the other hand
,
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conductiong
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international
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sports
may leads to failure of youngsters
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lifes
.
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, the youngster
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only
concentrate on
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sports
and neglect the studies, he/she will face more critical problems if the one can't achieve success,
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because
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only
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knowlege
on the
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doesn't
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make
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an
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youngerster
, as this is the crucial stage in life, they need to concentrate
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for
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survival in this
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competation
world.

In the conclusion, not all
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international
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sports
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are
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good
for the
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country
, there are
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some
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events
which are necessary for the
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today
's world to
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better
development of the
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country
.
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Before
hosting the
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events
,
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countries
needs to
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think
about the well-being of the nation.
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IELTS essay Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad.

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