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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. 8low
At present sports is one of the most common way to interact and know the culture of other countries. International sports events are organized in different nations. Some people believe that it not good for good for the country while other think it good for the country. In the narrative, both sides of the given argument will be carefully deliberated before an honest opinion is arrived at. On the other hand, there are individuals who are of the opinion that hosting sports events are benefical for the country. The primary reason for the view is that its helps in economic growth of the nation where it organized. For example at present the cricket match host in Ahmedabad and people from different states and country come to watch it. Another reason for people to have such belief is that this type of event increase the value of a country by people who visited across the world. On the other hand, there are those who seems to be convinced with the fact that hosting sports events cause religen problem among the people of country. One of the reason of such mindset is when there is match between India and Pakistan host it create problem. For instance, a year before when there was a match played between this two countries the slagon came that Pakistan Murdabad. To conclude, in line with the views presents above, it is evident that both the ideas hold on their respective positions. I, however, am of the frim opinion that hosting international sports events are benefical.
At present
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sports
is one of the most common
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way
to interact and know the culture of
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other
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countries
. International
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sports
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events
are organized
in
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different
nations.
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Some
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people
believe that
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it
not
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good
for
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good
for the
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country
while
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other
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think
it
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good
for the
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country
. In the narrative, both sides of the
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given
argument will be
carefully
deliberated
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before
an honest opinion
is arrived
at.

On the
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other
hand, there are individuals who are of the opinion that hosting
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sports
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events
are
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benefical
for the
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country
. The primary reason for the view is that its
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helps
in economic growth of the nation where it organized.
For example
at present the cricket match host in Ahmedabad and
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people
from
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different
states and
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country
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come
to
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watch
it. Another reason for
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people
to have such belief is that this type of
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event
increase the value of a
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country
by
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people
who visited across the world.

On the
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other
hand, there are those who seems to
be convinced
with the fact that hosting
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sports
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events
cause
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religen
problem among the
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people
of
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country
. One of the reason of such mindset is when there is match between India and Pakistan host it create problem.
For instance
, a year
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before
when there was a match played between this two
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countries
the
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slagon
came that Pakistan
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Murdabad
.

To conclude
, in line with the views presents above, it is evident that both the
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ideas
hold on their respective positions. I,
however
, am of the
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frim
opinion that hosting international
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sports
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events
are
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benefical
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
6.0
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